TanHand
on An Ode to minorties that use Paprika by Shardik
4 Mar 2003, 10:16 PM
Still sucks.
Provocative and quite amusing.
Maybe you just suck. I have talent out the wazoo. You're the only one who complains, possibly only due to your own thwarted sex drive. See an analyst. I am a sexual surrealist genius. In closing, fuck you and the horse you long for, assmaggot.
I thought that you said the pink ones had let you done, bitch?
'I dig you Asian dude.....snap on tools'. Is its own poem. Many great images. The mexican hawking roasted maize is important. I shall write one too.
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Very nice. Talent overflow! You rawk.
Very powerful.
No problem, but I have a beautifull cock, so I guess your argument is with God tit-teeth, and i'm sure there are a lot of other men who are willing to step forward here and proclaim that they too have pretty puds, stud monkey was it? yes i think it was. Also; i know woman that will come forward with the truth. That they also have eye friendly floggers, my friend soooooooo that said. YOU just got the short end of the stick, friend, buddy, pal, aquaintance, surrogate toothpaste unfolder, visor flipper, pool cleaner.
yes.
oh how i can relate!! simple and i liked it.
The top five lines are redundant. The rest a hell of a meal. Simple, and pleasantly sinister.
lol this is gold because it's so true...i have the same stupid shit scrawled on my books as well! :) thanks for this!
The laws of the universe states that to be quite normal Mr. Jones.
and this doesn't suck...how? i'll stick to the "shitty" american poetry
i want to thank you, mysterious one, for your comment on my entry...your poetic talents far surpass mine! this poem paints an even clearer picture itself...but i eagerly welcome you to analyze my poetry whenever you'd like! take care.
The thought of returning to flick in a match real quick is quite tempting though. lol. thanks, i'll use that for part 'the dos'.
lol i think this poem is worse then the one that i previously read...the same one you so coldly judged. eh. what goes around comes around!
Cheese and garlic are for the intelligent. Jesus would say maybe he smells bad to your nose but if you bear it he might smell good to your ears if you listen he might have something to teach you, and by the way, i also prefer cheese to cookies any day, but i did think this a good poem so 7.
"You are the children of the Lord your God; you shall not cut yourselves nor shave the front of your head for the dead" Deuteronomy chap 14 V1
"Has then what is good become death to me? Certainly not! But sin, that it might appear sin, was producing death in me through what is good, so that sin through the commandment might become exceedingly sinful." Romans Chap 7 V 13
"There is some shit i will not eat"
E E cummings.
Well Durt, since you like quotes and all.
I don't drink by the way i quit to start quoting Marie Ebner von Eschenbach.
She downed the bottle because that's what these kinds of 'sensitive' people are good at, but life is more then what can and can't fit on or in a bottle of anything huh Durt. No matter how many different ways you try to write it, it all equates to the same concluding dilema that being a cowards way out of a situation that requires thought not the selfish stupidity of a misunderstood suicide. maybe you should of wrote her more poetry and less grocery lists