hipster flare
on ship by Sh|t?
3 Mar 2003, 5:35 AM
as weak as an old man's bladder.
shame on you. this is all over the web, and was even a joke of the day from www.geocities.com/steve_lynchuk/jokes.ht
I was doing fine until you made fun of bacon. it is my breakfast meat of choice, and it is not gay.
however, the last is the best.
most likely all of the above. 8 grins.
infusions more likely.
confusion too
stars have no story of their own - it's all our own ifusions
you're right ... it was a jotting. I'll develop the first stanza into something else.
Hidden meaning? Vague? it's about getting use to life and change for the unsurprising surpise of dying inevitably. in other words, beauty holds death as well as death holds beauty, Nature reveals this point on every level. mix that with the fact that i'm a sun baby with a shark and wave fetish and vualla shark fin and femur soup. the water coupled by the babtism by blood and nature. Jesus walked on water. We don't.
Don't. Because in all honesty i could fucking give a shit really.
As for the topic being 'not great' was it suppose to be? Style? that's funny. you're funny? do you detect a pattern? Good for you, congradulation glad it wasn't to cryptic for you. tell me smart guy? How is this haiku series any different from your user name? Exactly, my point. same purpose don't be hypocrite it makes you look stupid.
Hidden meaning? I can't find it. Your vagueness needs to be balanced with hints. Too much vague and you aren't understood. Too many hints and it's no fun.
Hmmmm....Topic isn't great. Style isn't great. Poem isn't great. I think I do detect a pattern. I expected better from you.
Next?
That only works for humans.
Captain Le choadke is dead, prawnes no longer care, but i fear homosexuality in this case is a huge factor, a rift if you will, between the urge to suck penis, and yet the other urge to retreat into his mother's vagina? perhaps you can suck cock in your mother's vulva... splendid, and rewarding i bet.
The only thing that ruptured was the zit on your chin that you wrote this with, and her fucking mouth. Otherwise, he was moved undaunted by the fact the boat sank, it being insured, and also that he could swim quite easily, to shore being an olympian and friend of Neptunes.
If you weren't me i would rape your mouth with a skunk and a sling shot, bastard.
Garrett S Sexton
replying on Tribute to the greatest ever American poem by Garrett S Sexton
2 Mar 2003, 12:42 PM
BE KIND ENOUGH TO VOTE!
Garrett S Sexton
replying on Tribute to the greatest ever American poem by Garrett S Sexton
2 Mar 2003, 12:41 PM
IT'S JUST A TRIBUTE!
I KNOW A GAY HUNTSMAN,
BUT THANX TO Tony B, HE'LL BE OUT OF A JOB SOON.
Is that ya dad?
I give 10
Jeremi B. Handrinos
on Tribute to the greatest ever American poem by Garrett S Sexton
2 Mar 2003, 12:26 PM
I think your last stanza did the splits.
Did ya play the banana game,when ya was younger,red neck.
I really enjoyed this poem,if you were a femme. I mate ya.