horus8
on For those who play with shit by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Mar 2003, 11:39 AM
I know you are, but what am I.
In all honesty I could of took this list to the extremes that no mortal's eyes could fathom lord Turdington. There really is not much of a difference between the 'bang bus' or the 'ass wagon' now is there
-=Dark_Angel=-? We can't all have our checks fashioned into bowls above our faces (levitating no doubt through the power of the KABALAH and Donald Michael Craigs fancy rainbow wand) In the end hoists and pulleys beat out being just an ordinary guy with the undiminishing dream to realize crossing the finish line while it's still daylight and people are handing out Gatorade. Instead of the inevitable lonely chirpe of the last of the sole crickets.
Who fucking cares whether he "gets resepct"? THIS IS POEMRANKER. THE ONLY THING THAT MATTERS IS THE RANKING OF THE POEMS.
that is a crock of shit! if you copy something word for word and say you wrote it, whether it is "public domain" or not, it is wrong to do. you cannot say that you wrote it when you didn't. if it was "research" you should have given credit to the original author or your source. this is offensive that you would try to defend yourself for this action which you know is wrong and goes against what this site and writing poetry is all about. You would get more respect by fessing up than by weasling around.
fag
whateva ho
lose comma after "city". lose second stanza.
nice form, trite topic, but nice form. perhaps more precise images or specific details...
almost funny. almost serious. tough to do well. the rhyme scheme makes it hard to take seriously.
all righty then.
a good attempt. seems to miss saying something important.
read: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' (by zero)
read: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' (by zero)
extremely insightful. I read thousands of these types of poems, but just called them awful and trite.
odd. the words are interesting--but not rhythmically limericky.
By Jove ! I recall marking this as an 8 but not mentioning what an excellent poem it is, original and intelligent well done
Thoughtful, and quite sombre in parts but nontheless a wonderful piece of writing my boy...9
I liked it all right. 8.
Certainly could have had more specific images and less superfluous words. has a certain "greeting card" quality that borders on stomach virus.