Ray
on "Crying" by Jaketiger
24 Feb 2003, 9:28 AM
I like this one but i like the other one more..
*bows* I thank ye for yr kindness.
Nice..you have a real talent....
The crazlady....i really like this poem! keep writing
Hey Jake..like i told you b4 i love this poem soo much!!
hmmmmmm well, i say 6
What a twisted thing to say. I hope you didn't mean that. It goes against the laws of nature.
Suicide is a very personal decision. If ou have thought it through and feel it is the only viable option, you should go through with it.
It is not worth it. Pull yourself out of your funk. Eat some chocolate, watch a comedy, go for a walk or a run--even if it is cold outside (especially if its cold outside) then write some more poems.
Don't do it. You need to stick around to write more poetry.
just buggy.
Nice, but seems to lack anything concrete or precise.
perhaps cum and go?
I HATE WRITERS LIKE YOU, BUT ITS JEALOUSY, YOU GOT THE KUDOS AND THE 10
You have made my day dear. I am in awe of your work and a positive endorsement from you is sacrisant. Your comment made me cry
"Thus, anyone who liked this poem who isn't a male hustler is liking it because the subject matter is novel, and because it is written well enough to believe that it really means something to someone somewhere."
Do you really believe that line of shit? You mean that you can't feel sorry for a child that's been molested unless you yourself have been molested? You mean that you can't feel sorry for a person who can't find employment unless you've ever had the problem? You mean that you can't have sympathy with out total, utter, and complete empathy? What ever happened to crossing that gap? Maybe I've never been a male prositute but I can relate to being shunned for other choices I've made (and some things that aren't choices). Have you never made a wrong choice and been aware that others knew it? Have you never looked into the eyes of another person and been able to see that they didn't like either you or actions? That is all it takes to empathise with the poor fellow. If you haven't the thought alone should stir some sympathy in you. I can also relate to being broken hearted. That is something I would think that even if you had never been through you would feel sorry for him about.
It's good. He must be too if he can afford Grey Goose. 7.
* luves reading comments* LMFAO! Man u ppl....... seriously no offense, but i think i have more of a life right now then i had ever hoped to believe after reading all that and wasting my time. I thank ye.
* reading comments* LOL! woo! u ppl......!
Im no expert as i hav said once b4, but if i like it, i'll most certainly adore, even tho gettin hit on the head happens alot to me i like it neway * walks off and gets hit in the head by a heavy blunt object*