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<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}> 8 Feb 2003, 11:58 AM

Actually it's about the beef jerky donner pass connection

Bill Z Bub on the realzz by bxjay170 8 Feb 2003, 11:53 AM

drow.

Bill Z Bub replying on Pain by Teen14 8 Feb 2003, 11:51 AM

I suggest writing a poem about the moment you found out she was in the hospital. How did it happen? Or perhaps a poem about visiting her. Get a little more specific. !Hey, wow! Constructive criticism?! What the?!

Yardbird on Soldiers by Bobjim 8 Feb 2003, 10:56 AM

Excellent Lad! However, for being involved in carnal shenanigens with ranking officers WITHOUT inviting me, your Unit Commander, I have no choice but to punish you. Get down and give me twenty.....oh, yeah, just like that, baby, oooh.....

Yardbird on Past by Dostoyevsky 8 Feb 2003, 10:48 AM

Pretentious shite. Well, at least I'm honest.

TanHand on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined 8 Feb 2003, 9:46 AM

TYPICAL NENTWINIED STUFF

TanHand on Liberal's Lament, 2003 by Frass 8 Feb 2003, 9:46 AM

NOT CLEAR ENOUGH DUDE

TanHand on The last of the sworn heels by Bachus 8 Feb 2003, 9:44 AM

EVERYTHING THEY TOLD ME ABOUT THE RENNAISANCE WAS A LIE!!! I HAVE BEEN WASTING MY VERY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!! A MAN IS NOT A PIECE OF FRUIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TanHand on The last of the sworn heels by Bachus 8 Feb 2003, 9:44 AM

ANGIE....ANGIEEEEE.....AIN'T IT GOOD TO BE ALIVE...ANGIE...ANNNGIE....YOU CAN'T SAY WE NEVER, TRIE-IE-IE-IED HA HA HA HA HA HA JUST CAN'T GET ENUF

TanHand on The last of the sworn heels by Bachus 8 Feb 2003, 9:43 AM

MY NAME IS PEPITO SUAREZ AND AND AND....angie....angie

TanHand on The last of the sworn heels by Bachus 8 Feb 2003, 8:31 AM

all about i

x311 on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined 8 Feb 2003, 8:07 AM

The universe just seems so big and uncaring, doesn't it? And life too short... I like the rhyming scheme--simple--but the flow could have been better in spots. 'Sides that, I like.

x311 on Life's Loves Lost by Jigg 8 Feb 2003, 8:05 AM

I can relate to the sentiment, but it seems like it was written in the style of a fifth grader who just got shot down by his crush. If you're a fifth grader--good job! If not.....uhh, better luck next time.

Teen14 replying on Pain by Teen14 8 Feb 2003, 7:04 AM

I have no idea what you're talking about. I wrote this poem yesterday when I found out my girlfriend was in the hospital.

<~> replying on Raw boy chiva by horus8 7 Feb 2003, 9:20 PM

http://www.geocities.com/zzinnia66/rossum.mp3

Tintagiles replying on Three Daughters by <~> 7 Feb 2003, 8:53 PM

Oops... sorry about that, I didn't see this during the past week. I'd love to, but not right now, as I'm too tired to do it honour. Tomorrow or the next day, or something like that. Just one comment I will toss into the ring right now, though: Why does the tense change halfway through? Just wondering.

thepinkbunnyofdoom on The Stand... an off rip by horus8 7 Feb 2003, 8:41 PM

Ahhhh!!! Test tube monkeys eating brain!!! The Pain, The Horror, Oh The Pain!!!

TanHand on While mining in Tanzania by Bachus 7 Feb 2003, 7:52 PM

I HAD SEX WITH MY POTS AND PANS

TanHand on The unlucky Janitor haikus by Bachus 7 Feb 2003, 7:21 PM

Bill Z. Bub just jerked off all over my secret stash of dime store wingtips.

TanHand on The unlucky Janitor haikus by Bachus 7 Feb 2003, 7:03 PM

oh and one more thing: Angie.....Angie...ha ha ha