-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit
3 Feb 2003, 6:48 AM
Yes, love, but you also drain the Psychic~Enyrgy from your mortal victims.
Oh God, the alien ex-Chancellor of Germany coronated in a field? I had always hoped this day would never come! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
THANKS!!
I Thought It was just a mistake my name not being on the list but then angain it could have been you just hadn't read any of my poems yet but i appreciate the gesture.
Caducus
on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit
3 Feb 2003, 2:06 AM
5th from last line, hmm I wonder why they do that, you cant buy being a nice person, as for the poem can you seriously expect me to believe that anyone under 16 would like this? and bla blah blah ( annoying isn't it when people are nasty and insulting without actually offering help, being pompous though isn't me I will leve that to u
and you have the gall to call my work bad, I wouldnt even wipe my ass on this boring shit
2. Look man. If you don't want to accept Jesu into your heart, it's only you who's going to suffer. Don't take out your anger on me. Do yourself a favor and just start talking to him!
3. No, I don't believe it is. I'm glad I could help!
4. Yeah, I know it's a question. I was answering it for you. The answer is "in virtue of the fact that the ability to save oneself isn't a requirement for the ability to save others". That is a correct answer to the question in general, and it would be a perfectly good answer to give "in the context of the poem".
If you want to call this a poem, fine. I would not call it a poem. I would call it a cab!!!!!!!!1 ASL
:sniff: You CARE, you really CARE!
2. No, a savior saves something. Take away the act of saving and there is no savior.
3. Is that in the 4th stanza?
4. In the context of the poem it's not likely. Besides it's a question. Questions have answeres. You're assuming the answer is "I can't."
I write poems. I put them on a site called poemranker. Is it poemeranker? Nope. You know why? Because it's a fucking poem. Get over yourself or you remain an ass.
2. He is still the savior whether or not you are saved.
3. Is "burnt with our pictures" a metaphor?
4. Whether or not someone incapable of saving themselves is likely to be very good at saving others doesn't matter. There are many possible situations in which someone is incapable of saving themselves but capable of saving someone else.
The word I used was "poeme". You're right that there is no "e" at the end of "poem". It ends in "m". If you're going to try to correct my spelling, get the smart part down first. Otherwise you simply become an ass.
anybody see the news footage where they actually showed a cinged space helmut in the field...pretty cool looking.
2. How is he the savior? If I don't accept it I'm not saved. If there's no sving to be done there is no savior.
3. That's not in the 2nd, 3rd, or 4th... that is what you said.
4. Would you want financial advise from a bum? I wouldn't and in the same way I wouldn't want some one with trouble being happy to try and help me be happy.
Okay, I'll use complete senteces. The word is "poem." There is no "e" at the end. Get it now? If you're going to try to be a smartass make sure you get the smart part down first. Otherwise you simply become an ass.
got your nose...got you wallet :::flush:::
How delightfully topical!!!
All your poemes are about love. Why are so many poemes about love? Do people write poemes about their other obsessive-compulsive disorders? No. Well, they should. It would be good.
And then what happened?
Oh my god! How could I have ever of doubted you! This is superb. Genius. As horus8 says: Brave. Just brave. I am humbled here on a Sunday night watching snow fall outside my window. Grim one and Grim two would dare call this: provocative, cunning, heart felt. You will go far in your writing career. I now have no doubt. Congratulations, Mr Ranger. You win!!!
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
2 Feb 2003, 9:52 PM
And clowns aren't fucking scary. Skellingtons are.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
2 Feb 2003, 9:51 PM
Forced does sound the fifth line.
Provocative! Sexy! Intrepid!
You snuck in a flask tonight didn't you.