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poetandknowit replying on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit 2 Feb 2003, 6:07 PM
Must you comment with all your pathetic characters? I have decided, when you can write as well as me, you can comment. Until then go play with your kid and call Ornella.
god'swife on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 2 Feb 2003, 6:05 PM
Exccelent, this.
Tintagiles on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 2 Feb 2003, 6:01 PM
Dammit, that title. Argh. That would make such a wonderful stretto. And I can't use it because I'd be stealing it. Erg. Oh, and tell Limonade I'm sorry about the hamster. Really I am.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit 2 Feb 2003, 6:00 PM
Good gracious, and here was i under the impression that i should give a fuck?
poetandknowit on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 2 Feb 2003, 5:31 PM
I think Shardick is your weakest character yet.
poetandknowit on Savior Self by OneFingerAnswer 2 Feb 2003, 5:28 PM
I would rather read 100 well written poems than just one of your lyrics or poems. I find it interesting the narrow mind you have when it comes to poetry. Maybe it is because you are gay.
poetandknowit on Despair by Caducus 2 Feb 2003, 5:24 PM
You sir, are the worst excuse for a pimple poet on this site! Can you really expect anyone over 16 to take you seriously as a writer? Well, minus DA. Do you expect praise from the poets of my stature? I mean, come on. Read this aloud with out laughing and I will buy you a pint!
some deleted user on Summer by MaliqaTara 2 Feb 2003, 5:01 PM
i love it, how come i had to show u my writing shit, and i never got to see what you write? i don't think its fare :). How long ago did u write all of this?
poetandknowit on Cloak Of Love by brokenwing 2 Feb 2003, 4:59 PM
BEST POEM EVER!!!!!
poetandknowit on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined 2 Feb 2003, 4:57 PM
Does using word varations like temp'ry, mem'ry, 'tis make a poem more poetic?
<~> replying on NASA Fireworks by TheDevil 2 Feb 2003, 4:44 PM
i'm in.
razorgrin on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 2 Feb 2003, 4:43 PM
nice addition.
razorgrin on Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus 2 Feb 2003, 4:36 PM
What about the Silver surfer?
razorgrin on American Idol epiphany in haiku by Shardik 2 Feb 2003, 4:33 PM
that's it in a nutshell. an appropriate receptacle. 10. rock on.
razorgrin on NASA Fireworks by TheDevil 2 Feb 2003, 4:30 PM
Explosions rock. Icarian joy and gladness.
razorgrin replying on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 2 Feb 2003, 4:29 PM
aww..whadda you know? the vodka was warm anyway, hence the need for ice.
poetandknowit on Summer by MaliqaTara 2 Feb 2003, 4:27 PM
"I dont really care what people think about my writing, but if another, I feel, decent poet from this site constructively criticized my work, I might pay attention." Do you know how many people say this yet still post there work here? If you do not care what people think then you would not post a poem. This poem has some exceptionally nice cliches in it. My favorite is "whisper in the dark."
razorgrin replying on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin 2 Feb 2003, 4:24 PM
Limonade's adorable hamster died and we can't bury her until the ground thaws. So she will continue to sit in a plastic bag labeled "Hamster" until we can put her to rest. Now ya know.
Shardik on NASA Fireworks by TheDevil 2 Feb 2003, 3:43 PM
I was hoping for something a bit more intelligent, but then againn this is poemranker not Yale. Stipend anyone?
JakeBike on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined 2 Feb 2003, 3:42 PM
the last line feels jilted of a few beats. other than that--much, much nicer. still sways sing-songily, but is much cleaner.