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Bachus on alone baby by famenglory 21 Jan 2003, 8:04 PM

pure uranium, i here a ha singing take on me.

Tintagiles on Listen For Once by Sarahmarie 21 Jan 2003, 7:42 PM

Why am I so happy I decided to get a glass of Scotch before coming on here?

Topaz Servias on Olden by smlink84 21 Jan 2003, 7:32 PM

Pretty good, I see some Looking back with regret

Topaz Servias on Thorns of Grace by smlink84 21 Jan 2003, 7:29 PM

okay, i get the gist, but it's just....umm...weird

horus8 on alone baby by famenglory 21 Jan 2003, 7:28 PM

now that's the smack down.

famenglory on poemrancour by JakeBike 21 Jan 2003, 7:16 PM

well i like it... is that wrong?

horus8 on Listen For Once by Sarahmarie 21 Jan 2003, 7:15 PM

i'm sorry, but this is the funniest poem i have ever read, ever. HOLY JESUS! HAAAAA! that is some funny shit. I hope you are not serious though...you're kidding right? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DEAR GOD! they've stolen my thinking chair. i have to run, later <horus chases after the drunk ewoks trotting down the street with his toilet>o

horus8 on Waiting Patiently by Sarahmarie 21 Jan 2003, 7:10 PM

Indeed, this is a bottle of diet horse piss.

<~> on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos 21 Jan 2003, 6:44 PM

this would make a fuck of a villanelle, h

Jeremi B. Handrinos on Together Forever by Sarahmarie 21 Jan 2003, 6:43 PM

Sarah....I think it's time i've come clean and just told you the truth..i love you, but..well..i'm a flaming queen. Can you find it in your heart, to let me wear your underwear too.

Wulf replying on Alms for the Digger by Wulf 21 Jan 2003, 6:34 PM

Thanks for the input. i wrote this as a performance piece, then went back a few months later and added the intro so i'd have some place to step off from. WORDWULF

horus8 on Ode to spoons by Dostoyevsky 21 Jan 2003, 5:25 PM

Once a made a maple spagetti sauce spoon in woodshop in the 8th grade. It never touched the sauce only my ass.(my grammies weapon on my) then later when i was a junky...my dad would call me spoony? what a dick huh. That was the evolution of me and my spoons. I enjoyed your tale better.

horus8 on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub 21 Jan 2003, 5:21 PM

GoldenQTip. 10.

Bill Z Bub replying on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub 21 Jan 2003, 4:51 PM

Thanks for taking the time to comment. I love getting any kind of feedback, and you always give me something. I should comment more on others work.

Bill Z Bub replying on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub 21 Jan 2003, 4:49 PM

heh heh. I sure seem to like the word "rough". I use it in half my friggin' poems. Thanks for the enheartenment. I shall press on with this one...

INTRANSIT on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub 21 Jan 2003, 4:31 PM

don't be afraid of pattern on this, it works.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Alone by T'ien 21 Jan 2003, 4:16 PM

because it comes from the heart.......

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on On Wanting to Know The Truth by dougsoderstrom 21 Jan 2003, 4:11 PM

OK, It's not LIKELY to happen, but just say Jesu told you to cut off someone's bum because they worshipped satan, and had been pointing their bum directly at Jesu for several months. Would you do it? This actually did happen to a Christian Humanist once, but it turned out that the so-called devil-worshipper was in fact in a coma, and had been forced to lie face-down on a hospital bed with his buttocks upturned unto the heavens for over a year. Fortunately, when the Christian Humanist heard Jesu's words, his brain went into an infinite loop and he ate his own shoes. An innocent mandrill who had been squatting nearby remained unharmed.

god'swife on nothing, as today by <~> 21 Jan 2003, 4:03 PM

Fantastic. Minimal. Just what I was thinking the other day, only a lacked your articulance. Thank you.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on nothing, as today by <~> 21 Jan 2003, 3:59 PM

I'd say this is another tawdry example of my whimsical commenting style.