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horus8 replying on A black sanded tropical vision by horus8 18 Jan 2003, 8:35 PM
It's a special greenhouse to grow oranges in during realy bad frostings, and cold weather.
INTRANSIT on A black sanded tropical vision by horus8 18 Jan 2003, 7:25 PM
I get a little lost with (specialized orangery). 6-2 add comma before (so) also?
horus8 on Don't Think Of Me by Dariana 18 Jan 2003, 6:02 PM
somehow, i don't think thats possible. repent!
horus8 on Possibilities by Nicholas Jones 18 Jan 2003, 5:59 PM
and you Know this, ma-an!
horus8 on Charlottesville by New Life Drug 18 Jan 2003, 5:57 PM
"I was torn like the lighting in the sky." lightning? i believe this could use a could re-editing. Then it'd be a real tamale.
horus8 on The silent moon by UAFANTHORPEY 18 Jan 2003, 5:55 PM
remember scooby doo and the moon beast? great episode.
horus8 on Sympathy for a Pig by phbiscuit 18 Jan 2003, 5:53 PM
eggs an such..S
razorgrin replying on A Passing Love by razorgrin 18 Jan 2003, 5:50 PM
I don't remember what I said. i doubt i was even that pissed. whatever. peace.
horus8 on America by little_angel_maria 18 Jan 2003, 5:21 PM
No, not according to malthusian theorys.
horus8 on Confused by planetdicko 18 Jan 2003, 5:17 PM
try asexuality. it works..that and murdering people..for cash...and writing vilanelles helps too.
horus8 on why? by little_angel_maria 18 Jan 2003, 5:15 PM
ski jumping is for adults young lady, REPENT IN THE NAME OF JESUS! <body starts to twist and gyrate whilst banging the vulve with the christ doll haaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!> sorry just be moving along now.
horus8 on Yellow! by AuntyM 18 Jan 2003, 5:13 PM
sounds like a malpractice suit.
horus8 replying on Jingoism saved the wingnut by horus8 18 Jan 2003, 5:03 PM
No I haven't written very meany concrete poems. I enjoy this piece, because, well you can read it in a variety of different ways and manners, and having taking this out of what it 'was' for this edit (it was a mess before this), was a hell of a task, i must say...so, thank you, and i appreciate you taking the time to read it.
INTRANSIT replying on 2 from 6 by INTRANSIT 18 Jan 2003, 2:34 PM
turtles, tortles, lets call the whole thing off.
INTRANSIT replying on 2 from 6 by INTRANSIT 18 Jan 2003, 2:34 PM
2 separate poems, written when I was 6yrs old. Tortles are not dumb. When they pick up off the floor, they're quite quick. Nor are Iguanae or goldfish for that matter.
wOrnella Mutiw on 2 from 6 by INTRANSIT 18 Jan 2003, 2:00 PM
What the hell are you talking about? Also, turtles are not dumb. I have a friend who has one....a lovely creature named Tutu.
wOrnella Mutiw on extacy by sir_heff 18 Jan 2003, 1:56 PM
You're a funny 16 year old. Spell check might help next time...then agian it doesn't seem to help me...6
jessicazee replying on The Poem of an Eighth-Grader by jessicazee 18 Jan 2003, 12:55 PM
thanks for the input... that being said, I am 30 yrs old, and I found this poem in an 8th grade journal of mine. I know they don't lose color at night; I think the "fading" bit was meant as a metaphor to the death of the flower and gradual reinvention to seed pod. Adult to elder.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on she was a garden of roses by crin 18 Jan 2003, 11:49 AM
"steel resolve" 'thorny resolve' might work better...some how the 'steel' image does not fit, and what would a rose poem be without thorns...que no?
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Who Flamed Roger Rabbit? by poemwanker 18 Jan 2003, 11:32 AM
"yer?" should be 'er' or yers forcing you to then go with butchers, which actually would make this better...i enjoyed it mostly. a funny ditty and witty but not like a three holed titty splittied six ways.