razorgrin
on Goldenshoes Shane by dantron
14 Jan 2003, 2:15 PM
them's some fancy-ass shoes.
ah ha ha ha. not a sonnet. nice shoes though. Did you know people akin to shoehorns suffer from the unrepenting desire to squeeze themselves back into their mothers? really, that, and obesity.
I was wondering if anyone would catch that. Nah, the fucka's just got spell resistance.
grendelicious.
Tell that to the atlantians. Your tank has to much ammonia and nitrite in it. Change your water, and improve your filters. Buy a cichclid to dispose of the gold fish
LOMG! ASL!
Why this has not recieved more attention is beyond me. The secondary theme is there, I haven't found it yet. This is amazing.
die! jesus freak and a good shabbas to you!
Wow!
Clammy and promising.
lol. The concept's strong though.t
minatory. i like it. great title too.
Hey thanks for the support, guys! (You didn't tell them about my Achilles Bum, did you?)
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
14 Jan 2003, 10:15 AM
Also, go fuck yourself. it should say poemwankeries fucking face.
stupid cunt, Do you actually think I do not know how to show posession when it comes to nouns? Here, go suck Jimmy Hoffa's cock Poemwanker (notice how i properly capitalized your user name idiot))
some holes in the flow, but the imagery and remorse are vivid, almost alive! Anyway, great poem I really felt what you were saying about the unforeseen rainy days...
I hope you've got a lawyer, as Hallmark could quite conceivably sue you for this dirge.
Do spells have DCs now?