Outside forest Elms Hot soup is a better friend-- Summer on a spoon.

Birth in the bust of barbara eden.

Well, let's see, none of Dark Angel's comment are constructive in the slightest, and I don't beleive Darky votes all the time, if you leave a comment then you should vote, it's just respectful to the writers.

oh My god you actually put THAT on here, well, grr... You'll get it just you wait.....

perch-er.

sorry just read the rest of your poems and i think they are slightly better than this so i will have to reduce my vote to 8

beautiful

i like this one alot i reallly really like this one, im not just being nice, this one is really good, an easy 9

very sad, those poor birds! very good poem, although slightly disturbing ill give it a 9, not a 10 as nothing deserves a 10

Is it the kilt that is handy? or something else? v gd tho

Or the way that she could go.

i will give u a low mark to annoy u since i think i gave u a high one last time its stupid to post it again

yeah, thanks mom.you fucking ancient gorge in the side of my mind. can i get a little vagina juice to go with my gaea enima. yeah thanks mom. for your history too, and that lucky scarf. bitch. take all my tens like you burned my captain caveman doll..rotten snatch.w

i have a rule against the word angel in poetry, but this is a masterful piece..have a 10.

radical. "SWAGGER AWARD FOR MISSILES AND JESUS IN A SUPER COMPACT HAIKU WITH EVEN A PEW TOO" nice one.

add two lines and this would be a sonnet, maybe it already is??

for fucks sake. i just heard the "it's a small world afterall" theme song to this, but god knows if i vote with bias they'll mock me. call me racist, and if i vote with awe and glossy eyes they'll say i'm a dolt. if you let your parents stand in the way of a nice rock hard black cock.than it wasn't love and you're a fool...do you know who "they" are? my shoe laces and zippers. 5..

worthwhile.