mikejedw
on THE MISSING HEART by Prince of Void
12 Jan 2003, 9:01 PM
It's six lines too short to be a sonnet. What's with the capitalization?
Doesn't exactly sound like a healthy relationship. In fact it sounds downright disturbing.
I kinda dig the poem though.
Hi Bill,
Thanks for pointing out the possesive error. Interesting that the bit you liked most was the kernal the poem was built around.
On the contrary. I am not the antiforce to this site. I have submitted many beautiful poemes that have been adored and cherished by many people. You have submitted two blocks of text that are clearly not poemes.
You and the other recent users (if indeede they be other users) seem to be under the impression that by going on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on about -=Dark_Angel=- you will somehow bring a change to the site. You think that people will start to take notice, that they will join hands and sing a song of banning -=Dark_Angel=-.
Poppycock. The only change that will happen is that you and your bumchums here will receive the poemWanker award. Look around you. Look at my poemes. For centuries I have fought with dullards, scoundrels, knaves, idiots, dunces, fools, cowards, cads, slugabeds, lolligaggers, rastabouts, rogues, rapscallions, ne'er-do-wells, imbeciles and boisterous peasants, and who has been left standing? -=Dark_Angel=-.
My poemes are the graveyards for a thousand dead foes. Weep at the likes of poetie, who valiantly fought against AIDS imagery in creative writing until her untimely death at the hands of the FBI. Look at Yardbird and redneck, pathetic prawns of men who scuttle fearfully about the site, clandestinely posting tedious whines. They are not respected. They are not feared. They are not worshipped in ancient temples under the sea. -=Dark_Angel=- is.
If you know what is good for you, you will stop while you still can. You cannot possibly comprehend the scale of the horrors you are bringing upon yourself. Were you to scour the world's historical accounts for atrocities, you would find nothing the like of what you will witness if you pursue this path. The torments of hell are but an enflamed buttock compared to the trauma you shall be subjected to.
My child, you will weep tears of love for me or you will weep blood. Which is it to be?
Ok look Madd Hatter No Hair Any Where....Ppl on here piss me off like hell...You all need to learn that one day you shall encurr my wrath most severe. The pain shall make you shed more than one tear. You will cower. For the better part of an hour. I will give something to you that is equally distasteful
smlink84
replying on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
12 Jan 2003, 7:49 PM
What's so bad about rhyming Blame name and shame? They are part of the poem and they have a distinct meaning. Like "name", Symbolic for "me".
OK madd hatter no hair any where...You got no balls. For your info....ChunkyHunkyMonkey is my boyfriend, k? And KittyPricess is my friend. So you best not insult them. I am on a fresh wave of vengeance. Just you wait. I am a hunter and you will be slaughtered in a most unjoyfuly way
smlink84
replying on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
12 Jan 2003, 7:44 PM
"crush my dreams", your an idiot.
Very nicely done, shows REAL talent for this.
look Darky. You brought this on yourself. We must all vanquish a demon, and you are the anti-force to what this site is. It is you that hath encurred my wrath. So do kindly step out of my path. Else we all shall have to dismember your hedonist self.
So what if it's juvenile, Hare, it still is good ,and Kitty, he's entitled to his opinion, at least it wasn't zero, anything written in this site should garuntee at least a 1.
Topaz Servias
on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
12 Jan 2003, 7:15 PM
Bearded-Man says, "inerestingly excellent.
Topaz Servias
on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
12 Jan 2003, 7:07 PM
Hey Man-with-pants, better than mine, though mine was more confusing.;-) Gardez votre promenade avec Jesus!
"the inafamous dark angel" lol.
This is like....ummmm....a hopeless endevour?
he wouldn't allow me to tongue fork the toaster? lol? bobjim? could you possibly be more retarded?
Sir,
1. You will address me by my proper Christian name, which is "-=Dark_Angel=-". This is a simple courtesy that I extend to others and that I expect others to extend to me.
2. To say that none of my comments are constructive in the slightest is a gross exaggeration. You will retract this remark.
3. I do not vote all the time, if by "Darky" you mean me, but I have voted on this poeme. I gave it a 10, because it is a work of great beauty and subtlety.
4. Your cannot spell or punctuate. Therefore I can only conclude that you are a Rogue. You will report to the Master's Lodge at three in the afternoon tomorrow for a stern lecture and tea.
I bid you Good Day.
The letters in my bowl sink--
Winter's sly typography.
(renga time! http://www.ahapoetry.com/rengfmwi.htm)
Hey all I actually posted that whole "Ode to the infamous Angel" check it out. And rate it for hatered. Not talent. And also rate the one that says if you so as rank me poorly
God I want to know what you'd do. I like being spontaneous. So you'll just have to show me. Put your version up...