poemwanker
replying on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub
11 Jan 2003, 6:08 AM
And you're also a FUCKFACE
Bumwagon.
Shitforbrains.
Fuckface
Fuckface yourself. Wanker.
Maybe you should try to turn some of these telling and prosaic sentences into images. Try to find the poetry within each sentence.
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on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84
10 Jan 2003, 11:23 PM
Why not start with a new title.
my last three poems are genius. 7.
It would be a better poem if you took out all the self-censorship and put in the real swear words you were using. It would hit harder. Never self-censor. It cuts the oomph out of your poetry.
i wrote you song for your sexy achievement..enjoy
yours truly
http://gangbox.com/mp3/thorn%20apple%20t he%20baby%20fat.mp3
God's wife is one of my favorite poets, favorite people, on this site.
And I had my heart set on a dancing hut with chicken feet, but ostrich legs shall have to do.
Jesus?!
here's what it leads too.
sell out.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/stagnantlove.mp3
superb..you've won an ostrich legged hut.. and a life time supply of wigs and lipstick...God's wife is a ' serious' poet...not a weed eater.
i took all of your poems and squeezed them into one doghnut, sorry
i couldn't resist.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/shen%20ring.mp3
a drastic improvement. what part of michigan are you from..Troy. Southfield.Birmingkam, perhaps Saginaw? you're fired. have an 8
are you trying to steal my gauze?
yes. it sucks. i'm blind now, and mortally wounded. (i tried to complain, but it wouldn't let me, so here's my complaint)