minuteswithu
on I Had A Little Nut Tree by Yardbird
10 Jan 2003, 11:31 AM
I've seen this happen to other people's wives, now it's happening to mine.
good one dewd. Guess what my nickname refers to?
not that there's anything wrong with the jews of course. They're just like you or I, I really can't see what the big fuss is about.
Totally awesome. 10 to offset those fucking jew loving nazis.
Why can't it end with a verb? "The dog ran." Grammatically correct and complete, isn't it? "The shoehorn--the parson's nose the pirate procured lubricated--glistened" would work if the shoehorn is indeed the parson's nose and if the one that the pirate procured is lubricated. Otherwise? Not so much.
Show, don't tell. Show.
TmaraZ112
on OK, I apologize - it's steaming shite and no mistake, but it was the best I could come up with on the spur of the moment. I'm off to slit my wrists now, since writer's block has sent me spiralling into the depths of the deepest depression in human history... by Yardbird
10 Jan 2003, 10:08 AM
This one has no man kissing, masturbation or huge ascii art of anything amusing. 8.
I'm thinking someone put elmers glue in his apricot scented lubriderm/latest issue of cat fancy magazine
Neat. But were you at least wearing a vest of human skin at the time? Spankings $20.
I have caused 2 people to have to go to Anger Management, 1 to change school in disgrace and 1 grade 8 teacher to only teach kindergarten.
omg awww dat was so good i love it mami i can so rel8 2 wat u feel
razorgrin
on OK, I apologize - it's steaming shite and no mistake, but it was the best I could come up with on the spur of the moment. I'm off to slit my wrists now, since writer's block has sent me spiralling into the depths of the deepest depression in human history... by Yardbird
10 Jan 2003, 9:59 AM
groove. in the heart and the poem.
I'm sure Madeleine L'Engle will appreciate your 10, Caducus. Athena, bored now.
http://www.praxistable.org/06032001.html
Its a shame no-one read this it deserved some critique. I enjoyed this but my interest started waning on the last 2 stanzas, its a good poem otherwise, why not re submit? heres a 6
Four flies on grey velvet -7
better now s3 is sorted here is your fat lady .....8
Dogshit ! but its so bad it has a place here and your user name is very nice so i'm giving you 10 for that and 0 for the poem = 5, may the lordy bless you and bathe you till you choke on poetry, ( maximum respect though dude I dig you man
Precisely.
Dear god.
Utter tripe. You need to be shot. Or worse.