razorgrin
on ??????? by Emotionz
9 Jan 2003, 11:46 AM
that's pretty bad. bad spelling (took me a while to figure out what 'iger' is). Stabbed in the wound? That's some aim.
The first five lines show promise. The end however, sucks so hard that no amount of cinnamon toast will quench my hate. grrr..0.
Hi, vulcan
Been meaning to read more of your "stuff" and I hope it is all as good as this one. Loved the way you tied it all together in the last stanza. It made me think which I like a poem to do. Very impressive with great imagery and meaning. I give it a nine though I think a ten is not out of line. Oh...just what does a crocodile taste like? I do know they are edible and I'm sure the croc views us the same way:)
thank you. i've gotten that responce from a lot of people i've showed it to. it only took me like 10 min. to wright this, but i reread it about a thousand times, then called like half my friends and read it to them, i was quite pleased with it :)
beautiful...great emotional expression and the end is honestly breathtaking....probobly what you were going for too
not bad at all
-8-
From a bollocks-shop. Duh.
Anyhoo, still have a ten-ah, I think you're in the top fifteen now...probably won't last, sad fucks'll vote you out, but hey, this is a great poem!
HAHAHAHA! Good one!
Ranger
on I'm a homicidal kind of guy (spoof of every 'down-home' song you've ever heard) by Yardbird
9 Jan 2003, 8:11 AM
WA HA HA HA HA!!!!
Exactly
And you've got a fucking hilarious poem! Wonderful stuff, mon ami!
Yes, but can you speak English?
Hey, isn't it, like, Janurary or something?
aimed at bachas.damn it! you got seriously bored with your no-family xmas lifestyle! get a wife or something you loner! Racist fuck
damn it! you got seriously bored with your no-family xmas lifestyle! get a wife or something you loner!
It's *coming* on...nicely
True, true.
Nutin' watchin a Bud, havin a game...Sssssap?