Carvaceous
on Track.... by Topaz Servias
2 Jan 2003, 4:34 PM
Only 10 minutes??? I hate you! This is really good, and thought provoking. Although...kinda odd something like this would come to you...where??? =-P
When your ego takes a beating there is nothing like going to the gym twice, having 3 Diet Black Cherry Shastas, dancing like a fool to Pour Some Sugar on Me, potentially going to India for 6 months, having a cool ass roomate move in on Sunday.....and just fucking looking in the mirror and saying God Damn I'm great......ahhhhhhh.
Wow! I really like this one!!!
You are so right. Thank you, my dear. Thank you.
horus8
replying on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8
2 Jan 2003, 3:37 PM
ready for the dead cat edit? here it comes.??
Forgot to thank you damnit. Thank you,sir.
I might not be your neighbor, but I am mobile. I'll be "touring"
when the weather improves. Z gets first visit as I owe her mega scotch. Then west to PKs, and then GW and H-8 if all is kosher with all. Could add you to list.
Haven't you ever seen the classic 60's detective show entitled "Ironside"? It's about a hard-nosed, tough-talking detective called Ironside, who has suffered spinal damage following a gunshot wound and has to travel around in a steel wheelchair solving crimes. If not, then I'm afraid you aren't allowed to read my poeme.
http://web.ukonline.co.uk/craig.pierce2/
Did you eve see my "Morning conflict"? If not, tell me and I'll repost. I don't know what to do with this piece. Feels just short, for some reason.
Killer draft,man. Sorry, I have no clue what epi.... what the hell was that again?
and whoever gavev this a zero, shouuld immeiately go wash their mouth out with soup, that's right...i said soup. motherfucker, sorry for the french, but this poem does not deserve a zero, or anything less than a six, and i'll prove that. watch.a
yes. i do. this is a great and grand poem. golden que tip. 10.
yes, that's usually how i write, and why i need a good editor...ahh, my mother..did me dirty...my father, yeah..poor guy, ummm thanks for the que tip, and the ten..i do give a fuck, man, poetry is my life..it allows me an honest release without the filters and restraints of a comfort zone..how's your project coming along..i'm still waiting for your synopsis. are you still putting the play on? i just want to let you know. that i might come across as a monster, because i am, but i have sensibility and an unmeasurable love for 'life', and people who i trust..if i can trust you, i'll carry you around the world on my back and give you everything i have to give, but the problem with that is people take and take and take until, alas, there is no back to carry with
any longer..i feel that i can trust you, can i? if so...i will help you complete your project in an affordable, time efficient manner that will leave them breathless...send me your idea, we'll work from there.s
We give him all the help that we can. They're called 'tranquilisers'.
Yes, wonderful news.
Har har har! Have a ten, you continue to amuse me, Dark Angel...just one question-who's Ironshoe in reality?
If this is your writing getting worse, show me some of your best.
Cheers dude, nice to see there are people on here who aren't twats!