==Doylum
replying on Masculine by temptalia
2 Jan 2003, 5:35 PM
how about chapped lips from being out on the street all night?
oh my dear handshandy your not the big tongued kitchen freak in disguise are you?
Excellent. What were you smoking?
Mind if I ask who inspired this?
its good but im sure im still into the love poems believe it or not
OM needs to get a life. Your work is commendable.
once again its agiht but im into the love poems and dont let my user name throw u off im a very sweet guy
its aigth but im more into the love poems sorry
good poem i like it its great
it reminds me of great times i had :)
I bought a homeless man Doritos with my credit card from 7/11 today...I'm probably poorer than he is...but hey it was the gesture right?
I like......81/2
How about morphine? Maybe arsnic?
No, but I've seen Dragnet on Nick at Nite in the US
bestrew and gentile in the same poem, remarkable. have and eight. shall we date?i
Have you been watching The Manaquin....a popular 80s movie. I especially liked the black guy with the pink Cadillac......ahhh...it's like a scene from West Hollywood.
this is really good have a 10
kool
I like rough hands, especially if they have calluses. Ahh there is nothing like the touch of a rough hand. Thin lips..ughhhhh...how about chapped lips from being out all day in the field?
no i wrote this newayz wht i write comes out of my heart not my head
You are like the fat couple from Keeping Up Appearances...I love that show...it's on PBS. Your poem is god but do you write about anything other than girls?