rockinindividual
on Things by Quarton
26 Dec 2002, 2:53 PM
wow...this is simply amazing. i love "inhumanity served medium rare"...and your rhyme scheme...its breathtaking and intense and beautiful and a TEN!!
oh man i love this...had to read it a few times to get it all straight, but its wonderful!!...8
Could you edit it thinner and more verticle? to increase the structures longevity and quicken the read to memory.
i dont know...somethings missing. theres no rhythm..no flow..and i dont quite see the whole picture...4
dude....that was powerful and intense and true and amazing and a 10
Thank you for reading my poem on Boxing Day. I hope you had a very merry Christmas. As regards hope, it's not really my thing. The poem is about the attempt to fabricate hope, and the failure to do so, and so it's not really a hopeful poem at all. It's all very political. The line 'our ideology is not a joke' always seemed very clumsy to me (it's hard to read with the correct rhythm) but absolutely vital - this is about people who believe in what they do, but realise it's very, very hard.
Consider this: As a result of contraception, loads of people aren't being born. If given the choice, those people would probably opt for existence. Therefore contraception is naughty.
i think this is definetly a winner Nick. the last stanza could of had a bit more hope? awareness is more than half of the bottle.
tsk. tsk. i was hoping for something involving your chinstrip, and more futility. bummer. great user name though.
Ask yourself this: How can something that intentionally spends its entire life in the nude be sentient?
inxs has never sounded worse, and you left out..."i've got a new sensation" which is a dissappointment indeed.
It brings a whole new meaning to enlightenment
My thoughtful friend we are now aquatic mammals! Our brand of debauchery is despised from here to there. The change starts with you, and it (unfortunately or not for us), ends there as well.
I did not cook, but my brother did--baked ziti because he's considerate and a killer cook, and he even made me my own gravy without meat and sent me home with leftovers and a bottle of homemade wine--he's a good brother. Lots of hearty red wine and macaroni--yum. Tons of snow, but it was great; we haven't had a white Christmas in years and it was blizzardy and wonderful, a real barnstorming New England holidolly. Skidded and slipped up the road to hang out with friends and watch Monty Python and the Holy Grail--the SO was with his kid in PA, but it was otherwise a great, mellow holiday. Hope yours was too! bleesies to you to, Baba Yaga, and by the way, here's a belated 9 for your jihad jubilee. Hee.
Hi, Well, I'm not really against hunting or
raising livestock. It is what is hunted for what
purpose and how "captive" animals are treated
that concerns me. If there was no livestock raised,
the animals would obviously never have been born.
If treated humanely, they would probably opt for
existence. We all must die.
It's a bit stiff, but I'm feeling your vibe and I vote yes
Meat is to murder as Man is to machine