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INTRANSIT on March by <~> 19 Dec 2002, 4:49 PM
Beauty, as usual.
LETO on Days by Katie 19 Dec 2002, 4:44 PM
gota alot of feelin
Bachus on THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO 19 Dec 2002, 4:13 PM
unicorn blood and strudels. no!
Bachus replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus 19 Dec 2002, 3:54 PM
yep..that's how they do it..yesterday it was england that was big in germany and today it's hannibal. jesus. but did they really have snack time scrotum?
poetandknowit replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 3:52 PM
No, does that sound like porn? Well only on Skinamax because they have deep plots and no penetration. I must go to the gardens for a parteeeeeee! Have fun at the farm. I will be working later if you are sober.
Yesterdays NT Times. The German media is milking if for all its work to make the forget about economic doom.
Bachus replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus 19 Dec 2002, 3:49 PM
good point, i like that idea.
Bachus replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus 19 Dec 2002, 3:49 PM
it dissapeared. anyway. are you serious about the german thing, cuz that's funny.
The why not separate it and make it Wall Mart?
Bachus replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus 19 Dec 2002, 3:46 PM
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. you see, my invented word has 'more' symbolic significance..it reeks of multifaceted hurdles to find and climb because i'm a poet. i can spell it backwards "tramllaw" "TRAMLLAW DAMNIT" pay attention damnit "tramllaw" if your not more carefull you'll not get the fruitbasket with cheap shampagnee and greening cheze'.
<~> replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 3:43 PM
do you watch porn, p&k? o\i mean, other than the tapes we made in delaware that time?
You're funny.
Bachus replying on The Lordy only knows why tornados have no nose by Bachus 19 Dec 2002, 3:34 PM
yeah i know, that's where good poets like you wack it with a zero, and go "take that 'loseit in the translationboy'"! and then i go "NO!NO! NOT THAT".
god'swife replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 3:32 PM
I gave up remember? We are all the same tribe making war over language, belief. It's the Old Story. The blood is the beauty after all. Wounds decry just how much you can survive. Look at me I believe I could outlive the crucifix. Fathers forgive me, Mothers forgive I know these words count for something. I saw ice packed blue from a healthy distance go down the trees buckling like matchsticks. No one made a sound.
poetandknowit replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 3:17 PM
The land is taken, I know that, but I believe as many Native American who are not in the Casino business that the land is everyone's and no one's at the same time. with this comes ultimate respect. I think this is why those who challenge it, have been hurt by it, killed by it take care of it so. Have you ever seen an avalanche? I did once, backpacking in the middle of nowhere Maroon Bells wilderness area. I was a prude of a 26 PhD student who fancied my bicycles and thought I was immortal (not in the Blade sense). It was at that point, watching that massive thrust and fall and awesome beauty, that I realized how lethal mountains are. It took that long. Since then, I have given plenty of blood, and a couple of teeth, to the land, which I think is a fair trade. Now Hawaii, that is a sad case. Not only did we take it, but also 95 percent is private land. That is not right. I have written plenty of poetry as always. I just stopped posting. It was not getting me anywhere and the feedback was either "oh you are a superstar" or "fuck you", neither of which is much use. So I just send it along to Z and fight with you and Horus here.
horus8 on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 19 Dec 2002, 3:07 PM
i enjoyed your sketch work,and the comics. You're quite talented.
Errr, looses everything in the translation.
god'swife replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 2:52 PM
Your first attempt at poetry in too long a span(at least here). Horus and I own the blood, Indian, you can see it reflected in our cheekbones. It is our land truly, as it is yours. You should have seen my son in Sedona, he grew wings.
Quarton on Endymion Dead by vulcan 19 Dec 2002, 2:45 PM
Very nice. No fat and well written. I enjoyed!