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on triple suicide server line by Bill Z Bub
9 Dec 2002, 11:13 AM
and blame it on your meds.
well done, sirrah.
no swastikas for you!!!!
Cool.
this brings me down. depressing and wonderful, like the end of something. 9 swastikas!
well!it's admirable!
Somehow I can't imagine you ever being lonely.
Thanks for voting y'all. The space bar really wasn't working on that terminal.
i agree with it, but so? and i hate the title. 6 swastikas!
actually, the third one should go last.
this is way too perfect! the first one is the best (for me) and so i'd like it to come last. great stuff. 9 swastikas!
Firstly, all poems should have titles. A child without a name must not be loved. Secondly, a Haiku NEEDS a title. Without a title, these haikus are meaningless to me.
Alas.
i don't know what it is, but i really like this. i truly hate lamb, though, but i'll have to get over it. you should change your user name before someone tracks you down and does things to you for your cleverness. 8 swastikas!
they must not be for me either, as i have no idea what a nork is. because of that, print this page and roll it up and bury it in your little brown winker.
nice. this brings you back to your poems of yore. the ones that make me want to drink scotch in a big naughty chair by the window. "unbroken" might be my favorite word. very nice work. 9 swastikas!
I too have wrote about my father, this seems to be more about you and the aftermath and i'd like to see more connection between you and your da. However i am not criticising your work, all personal poems come from the labyrinth of despair from the unchartered map of the human heart, The last stanzas the strongest here you could do with one less 'quit yelling' stanza, take care sir i wish you well *7*
It simply aint true from my point of view.
Hey,that rhymes too!
Zippidy doo!
argh yor making my head hurt
Does nobody even like the line 'Peace processes. The Good Friday Agreement and the Oslo Accord'? Well, I do. You see, I could have put it the other way round, but then the rhythm wouldn't have worked.