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ecargo on The Poem, The Explanation, The Goodbye by Piano 7 Dec 2002, 8:18 AM
Excellent poem. The explanation was unnecessary and melodramatic. Good luck to you and your dignity.
Bill Z Bub replying on missing time by Bill Z Bub 7 Dec 2002, 8:16 AM
Okay, I'm going to take all the advice. Feel free to vote again! Read me, Love me, Rank me. So selfish
ecargo on missing time by Bill Z Bub 7 Dec 2002, 8:10 AM
Wonderful! I think GW offers good advice regarding stopping after "new" in S4--you make your point with "rigidity" and "attack" later. "Clutched core" and the morning-madness kitty attack under the door are excellent. Not sure about the fold/gold/old rhyme--I'd probably drop it. Really like this.
Bill Z Bub on The Poem, The Explanation, The Goodbye by Piano 7 Dec 2002, 8:06 AM
Wow.
ecargo replying on Fatty Nerd Trilogy by Agemo-Z 7 Dec 2002, 7:50 AM
Oh, all right! SCISSORS!
little_angel_maria replying on Reasons by little_angel_maria 7 Dec 2002, 6:01 AM
thank you everyone :) im tryin but sometimes the bad in me gets to me and i write crap all over agin :( but thank u *hugz* lol @ christof well you better try me then innit hehe
little_angel_maria replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria 7 Dec 2002, 5:59 AM
are u being rude to blade?
little_angel_maria replying on IM PISSEEDDDDDDDD by little_angel_maria 7 Dec 2002, 5:57 AM
thnank u mikius all of you shut the fuck up ok god you have no fucking idea what i am going through u all have perfect lives well guess what i dont that is why eminem is my best friend we have got the sam shit in our lives
Caducus on idiots by w~* ATHENA *~w 7 Dec 2002, 5:20 AM
sorry Pk / ZZinnia my mistake
royalflesh on My Son is...a prayer. by horus8 7 Dec 2002, 3:10 AM
you are a true loving spirit...great in more ways than you may even begin to know. let tomorrow come easily and with this comfort give all you can to your family and friends - as I'm sure you do. You're intoxicating, irreplaceable and greatly needed in this world. Thank you for your words. 10.
god'swife on untitled by dniknam 7 Dec 2002, 1:30 AM
You know what, you could be brilliant. Get past the pain and pay attention to what you're saying. Stop repeating yourself. Get rid of the typos, first step. Then take a deep breath and make sure you don't lose the only thing that keeps you going. Stay focused. 10, because of your emotion.
god'swife on missing time by Bill Z Bub 6 Dec 2002, 11:51 PM
There is so much going on here, you really need to hold back, I know it's hard at your age. Trust me. tender lids Darkened in sleep. You seem new. Do not venture beyond that. It says everything. Get rid of 'over' in stanza 2(otherwise perfect) Also 'soon to bleed' in stanza one, you don't need it. Your emotion comes shining through. Trust the audience. 'Pouty' is also an un-needed adjective, 'perfect' says it all. Complete 'morn' to morning. I wish I wis I could know you.
god'swife on route nine by Bill Z Bub 6 Dec 2002, 11:39 PM
Oh my God yes. Bring the last to lines back up. They belong there, common, that's the point after all. Make them common and humble, like you.
Plasticgirlwithgun replying on Hunt <3 by Plasticgirlwithgun 6 Dec 2002, 11:35 PM
No,not even close.It was supposed to be a heart <3...maybe it got fucked up,o well.
poetandknowit on Hunt <3 by Plasticgirlwithgun 6 Dec 2002, 11:30 PM
What does less than 3 mean? Is that like 1 or 2? Oh, I see, it is about sleeping with less than three guys and really wanting to just sleep with one but being secretly afraid of the responsilbilities of commitment? Am I in the neighborhood? This is deep, black head stuff!!!
Plasticgirlwithgun replying on Fetish. by Plasticgirlwithgun 6 Dec 2002, 11:03 PM
Ha-ha.Uh,I am not actually plastic.It is from a song.Sonic Youth "Plastic Sun"...yeah.
Freddy replying on We are ignorance by Freddy 6 Dec 2002, 10:55 PM
Ok, my second stanza was about how we how we support organizations wich we know destroy the world yet we let them play innocent and dont give them any blame.(horned angels). And how we hate and laugh at real medicines and sciences that we could use if wed just put away some of our pride like medical marijuana(devils with wings). And then despite all these evils we continue to have faith in our civilization. Despite all the evidence that it is failing us.
<~> replying on Fatty Nerd Trilogy by Agemo-Z 6 Dec 2002, 10:53 PM
paper.
<~> on Happy Cancer! by Agemo-Z 6 Dec 2002, 10:32 PM
wow. that's some a-1 berating. success! go on, quit now while you're at the top of your game, genius. have some ballast. love, z
<~> on Space Age Bun Rigidifier by Quarton 6 Dec 2002, 10:25 PM
amusing, but could you condense? why does it need to go on so? i don't think it does. you whipt those words into shape in your other works; put down the cat and HONE!