<{Baba^Yaga}>
on Hefty Smurf by Bachus
6 Dec 2002, 4:45 PM
damn, the random buttom goes to the smurf channel?
people climb mountains to climb..never to mount. ??
the wind is the barber.
Wow....that was a complament.
Led Zeppelin should get *some* credit for (at least inspiring) the first two lines; other than that, it's anyone's guess.
even at 2:24 typos like that fuck up the poem like a monkey wrench. change i to they in increases self involvement by pretending to shy away from it.f
what? fatter? you date rich guys and you're a spoiled brat...you watch ricky schroeder in silver spoon reruns...ha!ha! and the truth is blood makes you queasy...great poem! 9.h
i would of ended at sesame street.@
Very fine. I have no winter here. Winter only means paper whites instead of black-eyed susans.
nice.
who wrote this one, p&k? hatter? i looked but can't find-- looks like lines from a few sources sewn together to me.
he wasn't talking to you, unless you are athena.
Thanks for the all the comments, I agree Z, this is just another aspect of it.
I do write myself, all my stuff is on 'word' or on poetry.com, and because i dont have a computer at home i do it at work risking the sack, if you wish to challenge my authenticity PK fine I'm more than up to it. Also a lot of my writing is personal and unless I have a doppelganger on the loose then yes I write my own work.
Bit spiky today are we ?
mawkish and trite. As substantial as a United Way commercial.
So do I.
god'swife
replying on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit
6 Dec 2002, 9:10 AM
I have nothing to hide.