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<~> on The Rebel by Nicholas Jones 4 Dec 2002, 10:48 PM
can i milk her while she watches you write?
simply to live and know, i hope i don't return...i hope there is no heaven...only sleep void of form or thought. some divine knowings here, accompanied by radom pot shots also...bit too long, but i say that in knowing that it can and will go forever.8
New Life Drug on The Story Of Man by sweetzephyr 4 Dec 2002, 6:20 PM
why do people say abyss so much!? FUCK
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Ponder on Pagan. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 4 Dec 2002, 4:43 PM
words for the circus. rather.
it was worth a shit while you were loved by another and oblivious because... but then in the last 4 or 5 sentences you bite your tail off by trying to criticize those with deep pockets...simply because anyone with half a brain understands the uselessness that accompanies the jealousy-guilt of that sentiment.6. i love the penny in the boys purse though.. nice twist..not lemonade mind you, but damn tasty still.
horus8 on Girlz by liljsmith87 4 Dec 2002, 4:30 PM
can i ask you a sincere question? WHAT IN THE FUCK ARE YOU BABBLING ABOUT, AND WHAT EXACTLY CONVINCED YOU SPECIFICALLY speaking, THAT ANYONE SERIOUS ABOUT WRITING WOULD GIVE A FUCK?!
horus8 on The Limerick of Dave by worldsofwar 4 Dec 2002, 4:26 PM
to self absorb. wow did i say that? sure did. grand funks on...gotta go. 5.
horus8 on flight by soccer23 4 Dec 2002, 4:24 PM
passe. 6.
finely crafted...like a deer antler pipe in the hand of a drueling lazy boy chaired drunk uncle.
limonade replying on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin 4 Dec 2002, 4:09 PM
I don't cram. I do, however, hold myself to a reasonably high standard in essay writing. Which is what I'm doing: nailing together a pile of literary criticism. E-mail here: beatrice@splah.net
==Doylum replying on the girl what gave scott the look by UAFANTHORPEY 4 Dec 2002, 4:01 PM
hang on then how does that work? Right so you take someones age and then, no no lost it. Looks clever to me though
some deleted user on I Am A Poor Little Boy In The Land Of Love by sweetzephyr 4 Dec 2002, 3:35 PM
this is so THICK and nice
Garrett S Sexton on First Kiss... by loneshadow29 4 Dec 2002, 1:46 PM
COME ON! ALL ON A KISS?
Garrett S Sexton on Ponder on Pagan. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 4 Dec 2002, 1:44 PM
A circus of words!
poetandknowit replying on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin 4 Dec 2002, 1:08 PM
You still find the time to show up. Are the others (Tint and Limonade)cramming and you are truly a wizard.
god'swife on nothing, as today by <~> 4 Dec 2002, 12:55 PM
I don't know what the fuck you are talking about. No matter. This is but a glimpse I am certain.
god'swife on Rich and the wall by INTRANSIT 4 Dec 2002, 12:45 PM
And what did he find in the other side? Everything he hoped for, or just some stupid girl wearing out her heels from kicking the bricks? She's pretty though, isn't she? Now they'll have each other to tear at.
razorgrin replying on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin 4 Dec 2002, 12:40 PM
in a while. what, don't you miss me?
god'swife replying on she said by Bill Z Bub 4 Dec 2002, 12:34 PM
What's the girls name? I'm telling you if you put here name there it would work. there are so many good titles for this poem, only you know what's real, I think that's important. If you do revise this, which you should, you have received some good comments, try a different title. don't worry about losing your votes. Most rankers come back to the good ones and re-cast.