T'ien
on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88
26 Nov 2002, 3:42 PM
you are a truly amzing poet just from reading two poems im ready to pay someone to publish these the world should see this WOW -10-
ewwww
aaaawwww so special
yer i like it a bit thin in areas but its good as a skeleton i gove it a solid 7 almost an 8
ummm again very good (attually feelign your poetry makes me feel really bad that im not this good or remotly near it) exclent, please write more!!!
razorgrin seems mentally retarded he cant recognise good poetry, thenagian you should his, thats probably why
eriee, haunting, excelent, all these dont it justice, it just is prefection in its depressingness, love your poetry
Bachus
replying on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8
26 Nov 2002, 3:19 PM
whatever helps you comb your hair in the morning shovel face.
your a completely moronic idiot arnt you hmm remind me of dark angel
some deleted user
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
26 Nov 2002, 3:09 PM
you must get out more
do oyu even understand what Aquired Immuno Diffcientcy Syndrome is? or are just an ignorant red neck?
Well i would say this is good, but for one minor flaw... all of it
I see you. I'm not very impressed. those pants make your butt look fat.
is english not your first language? If it is,then you have an excuse for this atrocity of a poeme.
stop whining and learn to spell, kid.
i agree poet hes a bit o a moronic footballer
Who? = you
What?= sanity
Where?=thats the problem
Why?=fuck know but you are
How?= could be brain damage
oh and i have just told you doe that make you happy?
Well ill give you 2 for effort (all 2 minutes of it) and ill give you 1 for the poem as it has basic (very basic) poetic forms of rhyme and rhythm, therefore i give it a grand total (soo dosnt deserve this much) of 3
this is ridiculous how can you call this poetry poetry is from the heart not a year 2 essay on wot my favourite hobby is
what is wrong with you people the only good line is "It can't just say a little 'Goodbye'" the rest is BS
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