Yardbird
replying on A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird
25 Nov 2002, 1:11 AM
You've lost it, man...
thanks i think o well wotever
oh god please tell me this isnt a poem devoted to your mother? see my poem what mother and farther taught. (dont mention the spelling a pretentious twat has already done that)
LOL!!!!!! thats not football thats masturbation
YOU TWAT you stole it go suck off a monkey cum back and write a poem about the discomft and pain of that!!!! to be honnest its too happy !!! AND also writing poems aobut angels is a god loving fucked up christian kind of thing to do go fuck your self your god too
you made another friend...and only by saying the word biatch...hahaha. biatch...what a great word. 4 in the morning...must sleep
that's one long ass poem..decent
damn dude...that blows for you
that's great...really good actually.
i got the tune of "No Rain" by Blind melon in my head while i was reading that...which made it even better then it already was.
similar to some stuff i have written. i like the language of the poem. good job
thanks.
Hi Caducus,
Thanks for the vote and taking the time to comment. I thought I did specify that it is husbands and the hudbands families that are the murders.
Cliche but nice. 4.
Line 19, "and my keep my dreams within it"... is that supposed to read, "and keep my dreams within it" ?
9.
With all those big words, I was going to ask "Did someone find a dictionary?" but then I noticed they aren't used right or even all spelled right. (Tuberculosis)
GOOD WORK KEEP WORKING WORKER