Caducus
on Held by <~>
22 Nov 2002, 5:52 AM
whoever rated this a zero really has no fucking taste whoever did it read zzinnia's 'Before Coffee' then take the Greyhound Bus going to Planet Fuckoff
This works well, methinks.
Yardbird
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
22 Nov 2002, 5:36 AM
Fair to middling, with typos galore. 4, and see this as generosity, seeing as this beats your usual prattle.
This is beautiful, and the last line is perfection.
Fairly good, if overblown and contrived in places. 5.
Yardbird
replying on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
22 Nov 2002, 5:33 AM
Sweet. I, er, wish you two the best of luck (?!?!?!). I don't know what you see in his poems, though - to me they're an affront to humanity.
Reminded me of Jason Vorhees, I appreciate violence after caffeine.
Jim eats in Korean restaurants, atone the bastard after your dog goes for a piss dress it in his underwear while he sleeps, hes just jealous he cant lick his own bollocks and noone else wants too either
well done
Loved the last stanza, how can this be criticized i wonder?
I like the way this builds up,it almost feels like a series of brief flashbacks, whilst retaining a poignant air.Nice work
I have to agree with Mr Jones,this really is naive and unecessary,just a propaganda exercise to stir up support for your poetry.
A genuinely cliched attitude;I don't condone terrorist attacks in any way,but have you ever considered WHY the USA is hated so much by some countries?If you're going to start stirring up patriotism,at least try to balance it out, lets not forget what it can lead to.
oh dear, i had no idea the ranker was inhabited by a load of wrestling fans
You should train the dog to kick back
Nicholas Jones
replying on The Autopsy (as shown on Channel Four) by Nicholas Jones
22 Nov 2002, 3:59 AM
I needed the bucket because I thought I was going to spew. It was grim viewing, but somehow I wanted to watch it to see how I would react.
trouble is the buckets full of organs. You should be educating yourself on late night channel 5 B movies, you'd see plenty of 'buckets' on that (all botox and no brains)
evaporating piss clouds on the move..intriguing indded.8./
horus8
replying on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
22 Nov 2002, 3:36 AM
truthfully i'm in love with him, and have been infatuated with everything that has to do with him for quite some time (my whole duration here, and you can ask my frineds, i even do a special little dark angel dance)...i'm sorry..i'm a sucker for people who abuse me, but realistically speaking all jokes a side..he's a damn strong writer man or woman whatever it is (d.a) i'm sold on it..his words are like a russian ballet on my scrotum..the way he belittles me, is like my mother burrying me in the backyard up to my neck..a day without dark angel to me is grim and pointless...if he was a she..i'd marry it. void of sarcasm, i'm dead serious. so i guess i'm the wanker. sorry. he's the internet version of mark twain, and i bask in his water measuring throws.t
Done