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Tom Colebrooke on A little by The Eskimo King 18 Nov 2002, 7:31 AM

Interesting

Tom Colebrooke on Mr Random by The Eskimo King 18 Nov 2002, 7:30 AM

Whatever

Tom Colebrooke on The toilet by The Eskimo King 18 Nov 2002, 7:30 AM

Made me laugh for a few seconds

Tom Colebrooke on Bloody Sonner by The Eskimo King 18 Nov 2002, 7:29 AM

Good

joey replying on we by joey 18 Nov 2002, 7:15 AM

dont drown too much

<~> replying on I Begged by abbaslittleclingon 18 Nov 2002, 6:45 AM

i agree. you lose the mystic of it with the last line. the transfiguration of the end to the beginning, of death to life--it's beautiful done. but the last line is cheap. think harder. write a more fiting conclusion.

razorgrin on Slow death by Blade 18 Nov 2002, 6:43 AM

you know, gouging your eyes out with a slightly tarnished soup spoon is quicker. It`s also less painful for the readers.

<~> on listen by daniella 18 Nov 2002, 6:31 AM

are you by chance a coal miner's daughter? creepy. nice.

jonny2000 replying on MY dear friend by jonny2000 18 Nov 2002, 6:26 AM

I AM ALREADY PUTTING 0'S ON ALL YOUR POEMS RIGHT NOW.

jonny2000 replying on MY dear friend by jonny2000 18 Nov 2002, 6:25 AM

it was written by my mother abd you could just shut up i dont see any good poems written by you, especially that real short one (dumas)

Limness replying on "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness 18 Nov 2002, 6:09 AM

i asked someone for their number; see title for their response. at least you can proudly say you earned a slam. write what you see. forget about what others will think. so sayeth z.

Caducus on I'm a homicidal kind of guy (spoof of every 'down-home' song you've ever heard) by Yardbird 18 Nov 2002, 6:07 AM

I think N'sync should sing it, then you pet that ppk out and whack em ! Full marks my psychotic prince

INTRANSIT on "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness 18 Nov 2002, 6:04 AM

probably me, after that little stunt "dynamic duo". Very accurate,L .

Tascobar replying on Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog 18 Nov 2002, 5:32 AM

Is that the putrid fester of a premenstrual hag I detect?

Tascobar replying on The Way It Is by Tascobar 18 Nov 2002, 5:29 AM

Quite correct. But look again, young infidel. 'Twas not the taunt which is spoken without thought, but the harsh words. When being pedantic, please also try to be accurate. That's all, comrade.

Tascobar on one word by Blade 18 Nov 2002, 5:22 AM

I think the most appropriate statement I could offer would be that this is by far your finest submission to date, and in all likelihood, will remain thus. 1.

Tascobar on Slow death by Blade 18 Nov 2002, 5:19 AM

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Tascobar on HATE by Blade 18 Nov 2002, 5:17 AM

Total toss. 0. Again.

some deleted user on Slow death by Blade 18 Nov 2002, 4:54 AM

Hehheh, I hav to say this made me smile, and it's certainly better than that poem about 'Maria'.10

Caducus on Broken Glass by Sugarbbybuttrfly 18 Nov 2002, 4:46 AM

Kep hoping for that killer line, add more sarcasm and venom, as a man I'm interested in knowing how the perpertrator affected the perpetrated. It didnt deliver enough as a poem but as a song maybe. *5*