Caducus
on Determination by Birdman42s
15 Nov 2002, 9:20 AM
deserves to be more read
well done man
'the faceless assassin of her heart' that did it for me - 7
well done indeed and i'm in a bad mood
Not really my Bacon Sandwich,
You irritate me because i think
you could do so much better, dont refrain from expression its like a dogs ass sniffing its nose, poets are lost but their poems are found.
fuck it I'm cliche crazy today = have a 6 its friday
I'm trying to learn Haiku, I've written a few but at least I've learned from you how to swear nonchalantly.
7, the last few lines, but it left me a bit cold
thanks for the suggestion vulcan... it does sound better in past tense :o)
Roll up a rizzla, watch some daytime TV, throw some darts off a tall building then run like s**t, take a chill pill daffodil,
time to relax from being INTRANSIT.
Liked your spikytonguedpoem
whoops just *came*
*kiss kiss*
For some reason,"alluvial" doesn't seem to fit. sounds like a brief geology lesson. I dunno.
You make no sense. And you still need a dictionary.
Great quality of content. If you can, tweak this to Nicholas' suggestions. I'd like to learn how to do this and this could be a good example. thanks
Very nice.
Dude yo really need to lighten up youre just pissed coz i have made at least one friend on this site and your plagurised poems are leading you to a life of lonliness so screw you biatch
How large must a cunt be to earn the classification "vast"?
I must know.
Oh, the poem. Have a 6, and next time, bag it up.
This is fantastic. 9. A gem of a haiku, on a politically and socially relevant issue. I almost came. Almost.
6 in the last line.
So
you
get
a
big
fat
0.