Yeah and maybe you're gay. Besides, I am not voting on my own work.

true, but fear not gentle maiden, for i am still without possession of the following essential sterotypes; mullet, shotgun, wife for cooking, nachos, and the general lee. and, for the record, i DO NOT think my sister is hot, so no, i won't sleep with her...today. clarity is now achieved.

Actually I am a woman Freddy as you well know. The big problem is that we don't have dicks, and it's been a long time since i've had one inside me. Freddy, our love affair is over and don't you ever..eee ever call me again. You and Rosie Bailey were having an affair behind my back. I now see what you are, a great poet but a cheater. I wish we had made it work but you were too preoccupied with other things, i'll always love you Freddie; but I'm afraid I will want to kill you more.

Thanks for the hug! And I do not live in Kansas City. read "What Went Wrong" by Bernard Lewis. You will impress all your friends with you profound insight into the Middle East situation. Even limonade. Call her today and tell her I am being nice to you! And if you do not look both ways before you cross the street, you may not have such a long life. There is a bit of fatherly advice to go on for the day.

Actually, I love constructive criticism, but I would still like for you to be gentle with me. I am an old man, you know, and you young girls give me the shakes. Ummm. Gnawing on your leg. Let's keep this a secret from the boyfriend.

I absolutely disagree. A poet should try to tackle and make sense of everything within their scope of experience, no matter what emotion is involved. Read Sharon Old's "The Father" or David Ray's "Sam's Book". How would the Jews have made any sense of the Holocaust had they not sat down with pen and paper? Using the haiku in this sense was a way to simplify the emotion as it was being experienced. Thus, it would limit any form of emotional rambling and still help me to figure things out while experiencing emotion that would steer longer poetry straight into sentiment. Thus, working in the haiku I had to think in a limited format and that thinking stunted much of the sentiment, while keeping any emotion on a bare bones level.

because he tortures his wife by going away

can you help with suggestions, please?

The reason is because you a crappy feminist who probably whores herself around to every old man in the universe. Face it wishy, your a punchbag for old age penis

I agree with you, kiki.watch out for PAKI, though, as he doesn't take constructive criticism nearly as well as he likes to dish it out. As it stands, the guy's flaming me nonstop, gnawing on my leg like a rabid pit bull. He's sensitive about his poemes, be gentle with them.

I agree Kliq, but please state a reason.