Caducus
on Obstacle In Between by confuzdlilgirl
13 Nov 2002, 6:47 AM
COOL
I like it. Geeks fall in love too.
I suspect you'd find them in the line breaks. This would explain why you never find love.
delightful. reminds me a bit of "sexxodus", which is on this site. I really enjoy this. cupcakes all around.
I don't eat at mickey d's. I appreciate your concern for my cholesterol though, dearie. " Asinine".... you use that word a lot, almost as if you had an unbelievably limited vocabulary. I folllow world affairs when I can, the middle east has held my attention lately, due to the possibility of utter chaos and that I have loved ones there. I am not any less of a person for not feeling much for a lot of dead people, no matter how much you seem to think so. So sweet to worry about my young morality. I truly wish you did have a life, though. You'd be much happier and your cardiovascular system would thank you. Sadly, I have yet to experience much travel, being surprisingly poor. I have a long, promising life ahead to see the world, so I just have something to look forward to. Here's a great big hug just for you. (hug!) have a lovely Kansas City day!:
forgot to vote 7/10
Hi newbieme, first of all I thought your poem was very moving, its a bit freaky as i too wrote a poem called 'Goodbye Dad' and when i post it next week i want you to read it because the scene you set is similar to mine. I imagine that could be read at a funeral and dont forget mate, poetry is not always about critical consensus most people would be moved by your poem and that makes it a force, you know this aint W.H Audens 'Funeral' but its your Auden and i respect that, if it was any Dad they would be proud.
love the opening 4 stanzas best, your work is nice to read and i will look out for more of your work. I have noticed by reading poems on this site that theirs a lot of zerohappy raters on some pretty good stuff, if you get anything below 5 their talking shit, give this a 9, nice one richa, good luck
This is crap.
Star Wars fans are people I like by the way. Every choice is welcome in the world. This is based on a true story though and that is what i was taking inspiration of. Star Wars is great, and I just don't agree with the total extreme. That is all, and yes it is garbage but it is a story i wanted to tell. Not one that should have been but well.
lose the last line, it dont deserve to be voted this shite by others i give 5 coz i reckon you were possessed by Ouzo
That Hits !
Yardbird
replying on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
13 Nov 2002, 2:42 AM
Dude....
It's all good...
An excellent sonnet. Just like the great bards, 'tis indecipherable and incomprehensable. Well done.
Very good, I'm thinking incompetent yanks are to blame. Theres a story behind this. Do tell us some day.
Cheers! Did you spot what this is based on? Oh, and I check out my latest submission - I hope it passes muster!!!!!!!!
Very good. Funny and it rhymes