INTRANSIT
on Shwe Nat by shwenatjadeflower
10 Nov 2002, 6:24 PM
Now I have a reason to put some effot into my dragon. A battle is sure to ensue.
this is the mad russian witches choice of the evening when it comes to tap water filtering devices we should all leave our charcoal havens behind..here's a 10. use it to house train a puppy, or to save the planet if you'd like.??
hey baby! how are you? i don't know why i miss you? we've never met, nor has anyone left? anyway congradulations on the base ment full of merlot...did you see frida yet or punchdrunk love? something tells me that we have a terribly large amount of unusual things in common..important things.. like boobs and merlot..just kidding.anyhow some lame poet is putting the moves on my son's mother currently(one of these self published types that goes around autographing his own book and handing them out to thee overimpressionable)..so i have to go rescue her...my superman haircut justs never lets me rest. this by no means has anything to do with my persistent fascination with you. i was just thinking out loud...talk to you later. luv h.
Ok, this is just poor. Dude, learn to spell, and don't write any contrived rubbish just to make the lines rhyme. You really need to sort out your act, and please stop spewing that 'daywalker' macho-crap!
yes, actually i hadn't thought aoubt that aspect. i suppose you are right. it doesn't fit with the dialect being used.
Beautiful. Poignant.
pretty?!
I had a problem there- I think "doth" goes with the rhythm but not with the dialect.
i disagree with hatters hare in that "doth"(line 4) serves very well in its locale.
Nice:)
I think I missed something. What the foosh is going on?
wow
what's 'yurming'?
i am at that point, between paychecks, where i have started drinking my sister's coors light. there are no longer any innocents, anywhere. unless one of you would like to buy me an IPA? or a scotch, neat?
I did...
and I am currently unemployed...
which innocents are these, zzin?
I didn't give you the 3, but here I went and offered you civility. At least you've shown what an ass you are. Call your mom. oh, wait, i forgot! the bitch is dead! she's in my zombie army now. says you're a sad little fuckup and she always faked it with you. So much for my attempt to simply ignore the gaping void that is poetandbabbit.