Blade
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
11 Nov 2002, 1:57 AM
IM sorry i obviously too stupid to understand your comments aside from the fact your just spouting a load of contrived bollocks. I also have mentioned nothing about a "war" between you and me its just you are a rather unpleasent and antisocial person who seems to find critisism for the sake of it boosts their own petty ego! oh and take off the trench coat and put the shades down yor not neo so grow up!
Well Mr Eskimo King, thanks for your highly constructive comment on my poem. It would be nice to have some reason for your hefty disapproval. Especially when your own offering is a Purple Ronnie rip off. So come on Shakespeare, what was so bad about mine?
Loser! It needs to be longer than 3 lines you shit, keep up the jazz!
Or drink some bleached piss!
Hmm, I don't know whether you're a literary genius in the making or just another serial pervert. Still, pretty good stuff.
The only funnyman here is you, this poem is soooo crap!
Keep up your day job mate, or maybe you're crap at that too!
Looser? Dear, oh dear, oh sodding dear!!!!!!!!!
Man, your poems reach all-new depths of shiteness that the rest of us could never reach, even if we tried. Sorry, but we'll just have to let you be crap on your own (aww, diddums!).
DUDE your arse smells almost as horribly as your poems and seeing as your my friend as well what does that make you!! an annonomous looser!!? anyway you suck i suck we all fucking suck!!
lets all be crap together!
Bravo sir, BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes, and your username is a similar attempt to make yourself out as something other than a fat bloated swine who can only make friends anonymously! And as for you having a friend, she only likes you out of pity - if she knew what you were really like, she'd probably vomit. Leave this site NOW, before you drag it and its reputation even further into the gutter.
PS - your poems still suck dog balls.
Richard sod off your just jealous ive made a friend and you havnt!!!! ha ha
Anyways the "daywalker" stuff fits in wit my username so screw you bitch!
Bugger off, you pedantic, pretentious, faux-literati bourgeois-intellectual simpleton! Your work is overblown, poorly written filth, you have the manner of a stuffed turkey and you, sir, are testing my patience! Begone, before you have the nerve to submit any more of this kind of doggerel again!!!!!!!!!!!
let me guess. jerry springer's inevitable future. quite a remarkably stimulating piece...not a ten inch vibrator with a nickname though, but here's a nine all the same.
gandi eat your heart out. then your spinach. 8.
"my hearts like a butterfly with flowers to give" is reason enough for me to finally get up the nerve to write stephen king that letter about how his acting in creepshow changed my life. forever. oh..."loving juice fruit" wasn't shabby neither.
It's mighty good.yours be the holy laurel bough!100
once again..you have boldly gone where no man has gone before...so here's my question to you, did you find my watch?
the last time the warm came without sound..well..i peed my pants...this is yOUR best work yet. here's a 10. cheers.
have you seen mary? after all of secret whispers and unprotected ass sex...you go and do this! my friends and family warned me they said you were just a playa and a pimp, but i trusted you...now i have nothing...you and the ants have carried off my last watermelon...i am lonely, and gay...again.
Thanks (I wanted to say this before, I'm late). I've learnt since what a haiku is technically.
fucking hilarious. ha!ha! 10.