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bluwiz replying on untitled by bluwiz 6 Nov 2002, 6:10 AM

uh oh. yeah, that was a booboo. sorry for that. 'she' is supposed to be the moon, but i suppose it makes it so confusing. i was refraining from using pronouns, but. *sigh* think i should do it over?

Tintagiles on ... by logun2002ya 6 Nov 2002, 6:09 AM

'You are my vision/of perfect sweet'... You ARE an imbecile.

Yardbird replying on Clerihews (here you go, Nicholas Jones!) by Yardbird 6 Nov 2002, 5:56 AM

I see your point, but seing as "merchant bankers" is Cockney rhyming slang for wankers, I felt it would be better put as the former.

INTRANSIT on everyone sucks. by kliq 6 Nov 2002, 5:47 AM

I like the message. I think it could use some dressing up though.

cleverdevice on The Gunfighter by deadstar 6 Nov 2002, 4:46 AM

I like this a lot, its very original.

cleverdevice on Innocence lost by deadstar 6 Nov 2002, 4:44 AM

Very symbolic of current events should Bush have his way. Sad news just in, Congress is Republican! Bush is unstoppable. Clinton had an IQ of 186, Bush's is 92! Where did it all go wrong? (apart from a certain secretary)

deadstar on when i had a fit by rosiebailey 6 Nov 2002, 4:42 AM

He sed Blooby u fool! Ahhh, G, dis poem is da bomb, wespect.Fweddy supports ur shit, bwuddda.YEH!

rosiebailey replying on when i had a fit by rosiebailey 6 Nov 2002, 4:31 AM

no i am related to mr blobby

kliq on when i had a fit by rosiebailey 6 Nov 2002, 4:30 AM

You are the future Mrs Rosie, are you in any way related to Mr Blooby.

rosiebailey replying on Beauty vs the beast by UAFANTHORPEY 6 Nov 2002, 4:17 AM

Shut yer hole boy e is one of mah homies and das is phat is dat, so if yer dont shut yo maoth i'll mush ya and mah homies will gun yer down wit our spud guns oh yeah wickid mush

cleverdevice on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6 Nov 2002, 4:15 AM

And people blame me for being immature! Its sick.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Collectively Chilly by oohv 6 Nov 2002, 3:23 AM

What a load of complete and utter bollocks. This poeme looks like it was generated using a Random Sensitive Poeme generator written in Qbasic. It must be a joke. Surely!? O' sweet, beloved Jesu! Pray, let this be a joke! I beg of you! I... *weeps*

Nicholas Jones on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom 6 Nov 2002, 1:37 AM

Just for you, here's my very bad Bush limerick: There was a young man named George Bush Who had no brains but a headful of mush He wanted a war No-one knew quite what for To avenge an old man named George Bush?

Nicholas Jones replying on Elegy for Lonnie Donegan by Nicholas Jones 6 Nov 2002, 1:19 AM

Why can't we all just love each other?

oohv on ... by logun2002ya 5 Nov 2002, 11:07 PM

I like this, it flows nicely. I don't comment much, but I liked this.

limonade on Beauty vs the beast by UAFANTHORPEY 5 Nov 2002, 9:12 PM

This image is cliche and you bring nothing new to it. You sound outraged and hurt rather than empowered.

limonade replying on Little Girl and Mom's mistake by t_t_redhot 5 Nov 2002, 9:03 PM

Exactly. You say things so much more concisely than I do.

god'swife on Little Girl and Mom's mistake by t_t_redhot 5 Nov 2002, 9:01 PM

Poetry is about rendering experience into art. Get it? The mere recounting of events does not poetry make. Look it up. Here is the inspiration, but not the transformation.

Tintagiles on rules by roses are read 5 Nov 2002, 7:43 PM

Are those actually line breaks or is it a prose poem? I can't quite tell.

t_t_redhot replying on Head-on Collision (True story) by t_t_redhot 5 Nov 2002, 7:23 PM

So i have to move on tells you that the child can not be saved. so why stick around when you can go help someone who can be saved.