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confuzdlilgirl replying on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl 5 Nov 2002, 7:16 PM
what do you mean walk with us. sorry im not very good at these hidden message things. what does emotionally saturated mean??
confuzdlilgirl replying on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl 5 Nov 2002, 7:14 PM
I dont really get that comment but thats ok. this poem though you should know is not about me. its about a friend. wrote it to make her feel better. but thanx or the rating!!
Tintagiles on Music by oohv 5 Nov 2002, 7:11 PM
Cut it up so that it's readable and I'll consider reading it.
emman replying on .:|Mindfucked|:. by emman 5 Nov 2002, 6:27 PM
line two = Robert Jordan's books "Wheel Of Time"...nothing swedish about it...
<{Baba^Yaga}> on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl 5 Nov 2002, 5:24 PM
because you taste like flat soda in a sock...quite frankly.4.???
PunchMeInTheFace replying on untitled2 by PunchMeInTheFace 5 Nov 2002, 4:56 PM
alright, alright. good lord.I put some friggin breaks in it. you people are demanding. :)
INTRANSIT on You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl 5 Nov 2002, 3:25 PM
It's good to feel, but don't let it consume you. Walk with us, slowly, and you'll be fine. Both pieces are emotionally saturated. You have pattern and rythm though, something I struggle for. 5/5
INTRANSIT on OUR FUTURE? by kliq 5 Nov 2002, 3:16 PM
Then I guess you'd better go outside and play while you still can. I don't know about you, but I aint givin up my spirit. I like pickles anyway. For the effort...
nentwined replying on can't by nentwined 5 Nov 2002, 3:01 PM
hmm, yeah. or even: "FUCK won't will not can't" to mirror the beginning some. thanks. that "can" is a bit wussy after all that.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Elegy for Lonnie Donegan by Nicholas Jones 5 Nov 2002, 2:49 PM
foghorns are made out of t-rex's footprints and walpole's skunk stripe white. here's a nine for ya! 9. i still don't like you very much though.??
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Hells Game by Katie 5 Nov 2002, 2:44 PM
change all of the "yous" to toaster. and the "yours" to pickle-bumps. carry on.??
<{Baba^Yaga}> on .:|bittersweet|:. by emman 5 Nov 2002, 2:41 PM
yes.this piece also is worth its weight in gold. a binding read through and through. 9.w
<{Baba^Yaga}> on .:|Mindfucked|:. by emman 5 Nov 2002, 2:38 PM
this is quite charming and true. 10.??
Frass on Hells Game by Katie 5 Nov 2002, 1:25 PM
Strong writing, Katie; I think of two cowboys in a duel, gangs, etc. 'The anger is hereditary' makes me wonder. You gotta keep 'em separated; teufel hunde.
Frass on .:|Mindfucked|:. by emman 5 Nov 2002, 1:17 PM
I'm curious about line two; Swedish? From this poem, I thought you were a male. "Just to seem more human" but, the result is seeming more like an emotionless automaton.
Tintagiles replying on Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b by cacophony 5 Nov 2002, 12:23 PM
You ought to start on Scotch and stick to it.
Tintagiles on OUR FUTURE? by kliq 5 Nov 2002, 12:21 PM
Babies are made, but they still burn, dearie. Easily.
horus8 on Youth Fair by daniella 5 Nov 2002, 12:11 PM
i will keep this in mind when i go to my ten year reunion in a few months. lovely.
Tintagiles on untitled2 by PunchMeInTheFace 5 Nov 2002, 12:09 PM
Congratulations. You make me WANT to punch you in the face. Bravo for this piece, which is a magnificent work for getting others to fulfil your desire to get a broken nose. It actually looks as though it might be good. But cut it up, fer gawd's sake, cut it up!
Tintagiles on you are my concert by snacktime 5 Nov 2002, 12:06 PM
Bravo for knowing how to use musical imagery. Even more bravo for knowing how to use the word 'crescendo'.