Frass
replying on Clerihews (here you go, Nicholas Jones!) by Yardbird
5 Nov 2002, 12:05 PM
This poem must be one of those Brit things; ich verstehe das nicht. Poemchancre.
I don't think that would help, somehow.
Let us be pithy: what you're trying to say is that it's excessively boring.
horus8
replying on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
5 Nov 2002, 12:03 PM
good, now we have something in common...because i fall into catatonic state upon reading even your first name requiring a sacrifice from my minions of a pillow cased midget and a crate of bananas in order to awake...you also should be pillow cased and pinatad. cock-robin wanker.
I can't help it. The first lines are far too redolent of Shakespeare's 'Timon of Athens' for me.
you sir, must think it's pretty funny to consistently mock the immense pain and trama of this young mans life!...in time..i will have satasfaction. prepare! i am gathering my peasants and goats for battle.
This actually made me laugh out loud. Congratulations. If I thought you meant it to, I'd give you a ten.
'Your arms wrap around my FIGURE'? Even by the standards of pimple poetry, that's bad.
i say once you hit 30, you're too old to drink that shit and should move on to scotch. sounds like your stomach's telling you the same thing. nice. 8
The ladies have said it all. 'So I have move on'? What?
When drums are rolling, they have no beat. It's a single wave of sound.
Gadzooks. The badness. It's almost palpable.
He is no God of the underworld. He's a deformed and ugly smith.
You're 'stock on earth'? Yum. Are you better with noodles or with rice?
impressive.
I mean the poem has one.
katie, in those same lines, you have two more "where"s to change to "were"s.
Wow! You crept under covers! That's so exciting! And energetic! And in need of an exclamation mark! Really!
He's definitely fat between the ears, all right. And yes... you're close to medically underweight. I beat you there any day, though.
Well, to be fair, she only said that because of the countless times I threatened her I would be contacting the FBI.