sliver
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
5 Nov 2002, 9:42 AM
Slick- Did you get mom too
Nice, First comes sometimers, then mosttimers, then alzheimers.
Our Future?
I think what happened is I was trying to make the discription work for a shopping-cart, do to the title. Perhaps if you changed that, 'queen of the bus stop' not quite but something to that effect, then I'd be more prepared for the 1st image.
it's describing the bus shelter, it's about this homeless lady that lives outside my building. i thought it wasn't too obscured but possibly it is, thanks.
beautiful, in an archaic way.
you should shave your own moustache. it smells like beer.
yeah yeah. i'm cranky today, so back off be-yatch. or i'll shave someone's mustache.
I don't know what to say about this one except wow... great read! :o)
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
5 Nov 2002, 7:25 AM
Sir, Are you blind?
you're such a picky old biddy! about the poet though, best username ever.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
5 Nov 2002, 7:25 AM
All points except point 6 are false.
could you put some line breaks in this, pretty please?
UnityMitford
replying on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
5 Nov 2002, 7:18 AM
you're one to talk!
ice baby ice!
it's about Hitler. does that help?
if you've never seen the film "The Gunfighter," you should, then revisit this poem. nothing wrong with the poem, but it could be a little tighter.
you're welcome, slim.
Thank you Unity for coment, I went back and changed those spelling boo-boo's, as you can kinda tell I'm bad about that kind of stuff. But thanks!! and GUESS WHO'S BACK...BACK AGIAN...GUESS WHO'S BACK...TELL A FRIEND...haha JK!!!! But thanks agian for the help! =)
Deep. I can't say I understand this poem fully, but I do like it very much so! =)