cleverdevice
on HATE by Blade
4 Nov 2002, 2:24 AM
You need help man, but in a good way. As long as this anger gets released through poetry then it won't actually be released against people. Good thing seeing as I go to college with you!
Hannibal Lecter would be irate!
And this is why I end up looking like a working class hooker!
Haha, Yardbird strikes again. No mercy!
to hell add to hell at the end and it would be a sonic sonnet..here's a 7.
YOU LIE! i see the ring from the bottom of the well! THE RING! and little girls with wet hair and horses and carlos castenada and snoopy? unfortunately this was extremely boring, but the ring wasn't..thank god for naomi watts. watts upo!@ 5.
the fifth line deserves a nine by itself, i enjoyed this read, because, of not only the acorn, but the sense of pan. and loveless songs to the infinite.
very wiccan and savy. here's a 9.
visually pleasing and overall laden with hope and mystery in a timeless sorta way.9.
that makes her a perceptive cunt too. doesn't it. here's a push up for the lot of you, by the way settle..loved the bleating sheep in "open letter". LOL!.brilliant shit, man i couldn't have summed it up better myself..that was exactly what i wanted to say when i wrote "for my friends over there", but it didn't quite come out that way. ta! (that movie the ring rocks, and frida, and punchdrunk love! yeah, and you know this, MAn!)8. fuck purity, it's a hail-ku 5,7,6....someone lick my crucifix!
odd then, that you know it was an obit in the ny time(big giant full colored captivation!). spic. neal cassidy was an enabler, not a writer...he was a liver and a muse,,beautifull and bold. good day(i mean night) sirs!
interestingly enough...none of it really matters now...does it...i've seen the ring...and jesu has moved back in with mother...i will be grendal again soon...very very soon. i will break the winded!
i've seemed to have misplaced the packaging, or rather, plastic wrap that so innocently safeguarded my cigarettes...i suppose last night's waif (?) must have taken them, the cigarettes too. Anyways, the story continues nicely...as usual. * I accidently erased one of your comments on my poem...so my typos will unfortunately stay as there is too much sadness in that poem...i'll fix it someday. but thanks, I appreciate your help. always.
*"do i know u ?"
only as i know they
very well writen. sounds like my home life.
Very good. it really tells how we see ourselves when we try to find what we are about.
It is great. I think it explains how everyone feels at one time or another.
yes something must be I knew.nice
Cool poem!
I felt that.
You're very good!
Wow! Love the way you rapped it up 2.