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<~> replying on morning by kiki 31 Oct 2002, 8:55 PM

in my dictionary, "Basel" is a city, and "basal" is what you want. but you folks in massachusetts have a whole nother way od doing things now don't you?

Tintagiles on untitled by skinda 31 Oct 2002, 7:00 PM

'Don't make me angry/I'll only get mad'? Sheer idiocy. Of course you'll get mad if they make you angry. Stop repeating yourself.

Bachus replying on i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus 31 Oct 2002, 3:51 PM

thanks..happy halloween! how are you these days? how is school and work? good i pray? well i hope the chuds in the mall aren't still making your analytical gauge go pertowie! you are an excellent writer, and i'm fond of your work also. have a perfect evening. ciao.

razorgrin on Avetis by KilIluminati 31 Oct 2002, 2:26 PM

"u" suck, as does this poeme. If it was spelled right and you took out about 40 of those fnords ,maybe it wouldn't make me want to vomit. Oh well. That will remain a mystery for the ages.

razorgrin on i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus 31 Oct 2002, 2:23 PM

awesome.

kiki replying on morning by kiki 31 Oct 2002, 2:18 PM

Maybe you have a limited dictionary. Basel (correct spelling) is another word for animal (adj), instinctual.

kiki replying on 25 mg by kiki 31 Oct 2002, 2:15 PM

you're an idiot.

adrenalize replying on TONIGHT by adrenalize 31 Oct 2002, 6:23 AM

Hey Katie.......Thank u for ur comments.....Well I know it needs some polishing but I had 2 free hours and so decided to utilise em by writing a poem and so its kindda raw I admit

Nicholas Jones on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot 31 Oct 2002, 4:29 AM

This is how Holby City should be.

horus8 on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot 31 Oct 2002, 2:56 AM

you kept my interest so...keep the eight. 8. do a series of these...they're damn good.8.l

horus8 on realities <from above their brilliance is short-lived> by royalflesh 31 Oct 2002, 2:50 AM

make it a brick mosaic, so you lose the double use of the word mud and fix the mispell, maybe violet to violent? the "vodka mumble" is quite quotably delicious and...than lose the last stanza entirely...good luck...and thanks for the vodka mumble..i will use it well..d

horus8 on before bethlehem by royalflesh 31 Oct 2002, 2:43 AM

stanza seven...line 6 "very"....that's brilliant...social security checks for the well manured...and perhaps a motor home trip to the four corners...10.

horus8 on An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva 31 Oct 2002, 12:47 AM

change last line "like" her to "than" her...it would be great...have a nine also.. and it is prose, but so what....just list it next time as other.

royalflesh on A little song by kawakurdi 30 Oct 2002, 11:37 PM

u sir, make human-stuffy afraid. watch your back and balls next time you step up to the urinal. pillow. please.

royalflesh on An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva 30 Oct 2002, 11:32 PM

to mine understand-ith, thuse attund a face di atimus. most definitely as one may compose. prose. if not mistaken-ith. (sick)

horus8 replying on Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8 30 Oct 2002, 11:24 PM

i am now...graffically..unfortunately..still, nothing is worse then stepping in cold, or a warm puddle of puppy pee in a winter month back east.

horus8 replying on James Dean by horus8 30 Oct 2002, 11:14 PM

i thank you, graciously.

xanthippe on i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus 30 Oct 2002, 10:03 PM

love it :P

bondjedi on An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva 30 Oct 2002, 9:13 PM

This is prose

bondjedi on James Dean by horus8 30 Oct 2002, 9:13 PM

brilliant