Wonderful. Wish I had been there. I just wish you bally Welsh could come up with a way of writing your damn words so that other people could figure out how to say them...

Awww...

Either you're illiterate; or English is not your first language, but your third or fourth; or you are trying to convince us that you cannot talk or write. If the latter, you have succeeded. Congratulations.

Resignation will get you nowhere, dearie.

Nope. You can't write.

I'm sure. Did you know that poppycock is derived from the Dutch papecack, which means 'soft dung'? I wonder how many nice proper little old ladies swearing sweetly are aware of that.

Then there is no point in your writing poetry.

Die then, damn you! Die! Why is it taking you so long? Don't you even know how to tie a proper noose?

No, I'd say he'S a pretty expensive one. You have to die to meet him, after all. Or take acid.

Stop shouting. Please. My ears hurt.

No quoting Shakespeare at the end of poems, it makes you look like a child trying to appear intellectual.

Please tell me this is meant to be a funny poem. I gave you a high mark on the assumption it's meant to be this funny. If it wasn't, I'll have to bring down my vote by a lot.

I might have actually bothered to read this if there was a hint of correct spelling somewhere in it.

'Satan pooh-poohed' is dreadful in this context.

and den? woody woodpecker hits a knot. denting his beak.

I think the first stanza would sound better like this: Tonight the rain is falling But Iv run out of tears Because crying in the rain Never makes the pain disappear, it's just a thought, and I think maybe if you go through this poem one more time, and try to clean it up some, it would be a beautiful poem! But other than that, I must say I like it =)