Christof
on A Christmas Far From by daniella
28 Oct 2002, 3:26 AM
Teasing, this. I like 'night'/'light out'.
I am glad you like my poem. But there's no need to hate the Welsh - the English do that already (and I am, actually, half English).
I do have dung in my slippers, but that's a lifestyle choice. I've got a special wall set aside for you when the revolution happens.
Of course, you say that having understood my subtle reference to Clause IV of the Labour Party constitution, don't you?
Nye Bevan said Tories were lower than vermin. He was right. It's amazing how a mild bit of left wing thought can frighten people like you.
i know the feeling....
i kinda wanted "some" and "none" to rhyme, which they do. but yeah its just a silly poem.
thanks for your feedback!
I'm keeping you guessing.... hehe
WHAT
ahhh I hate that song.. whatever floats your boat.
Too long/not interesting enough. You'll notice that most tolerable long poetry has a narrative or something to hold one's interesting. Make it very good very quick and keep it good if you want me to keep reading. Good luck.
LOOK AT ME I'M LIKE A FUCKING CYBER-TOLKEIN
The images are good. Perhaps you should compare it to my recent poem "The Story of Randal Pants-Jones". I almost feel guilty about now that I enjoyed some of your work.
ha ha ha
I thought you made tons of porn movies and died??? But you really went underground to practice your poetry??
Tu poetry es muy tanto y taco, verdad??????????????//
This is one of those time ASCII art is needed.
Rhyme very forced. Make it mean something or don't rhyme.
ha ha love the title. I suppose being gutless you also be anusless.
If you were a boy you'd be so fucking gay. 8