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<~> on Missing You by psychedelic 28 Oct 2002, 7:20 AM
the last line disappoints. the first 2 are setting us up...take us somewhere.
Mutant_X on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore 28 Oct 2002, 7:15 AM
this is a good poetry
razorgrin on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles 28 Oct 2002, 7:06 AM
hey, I was expecting some batman haiku by now. Less hate, more robots. or batman.
==Doylum replying on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl 28 Oct 2002, 7:03 AM
and so they should he is after all omnipresent
razorgrin on I can't write by Mutant_X 28 Oct 2002, 6:58 AM
Well, at least the title's honest. I guess I brought it on myself to read this shash, then.0.
razorgrin on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl 28 Oct 2002, 6:56 AM
so do I, shadow. However, I am an autotheist. God's wife: out of curiosity, which capt. howdy? that has been shin-bojangles' other alias since the name came to him in a dream years ago.
brazen on Heart of the killer by UAFANTHORPEY 28 Oct 2002, 6:55 AM
...its not even about me and i still wet myself in fear. brilliant. i'll go change now.
t_t_redhot on Two Towers by Tascobar 28 Oct 2002, 6:53 AM
it is amazing how you could talk bad about my work when what you write has no real meaning. simple it may be but anyone can write a few line down and call it a poem.
==Doylum replying on Sisters of mercy by strider1 28 Oct 2002, 6:53 AM
How dare you? I have feelings you know.
==Doylum replying on Truths by Nicholas Jones 28 Oct 2002, 6:26 AM
Has it got special little holes in it for mouth buggery? Like the doors of my favorite public lava tory. Orange conservatories glass houses special glass walls pressed with naked flesh oh hurah when will your revolution be?
dougsoderstrom replying on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom 28 Oct 2002, 6:08 AM
Dear Nicholas: Thanks for your help. That was a good call. Doug
Yardbird on Heart of the killer by UAFANTHORPEY 28 Oct 2002, 5:46 AM
Wow! A few typos, but otherwise, well, erm...wow! Spot on!!! :)
Mutant_X on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28 Oct 2002, 5:01 AM
go and die,have some mercy on me for god sake
Mutant_X on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28 Oct 2002, 4:29 AM
well,i always thought it's awfull to diss others poetry but honestly i think poetry isn't ur thing,try something else
Tascobar on Missing You by psychedelic 28 Oct 2002, 4:21 AM
I don't think the last line works, unfortunately. Would have been a good haiku otherwise. Ho hum, such is life..... 4.
Tascobar on wax by New Life Drug 28 Oct 2002, 4:20 AM
Strange - this doesn't make any kind of sense whatsoever. Would indeed be better for the loss of the last line. 3.
Christof replying on Living Conditions by Christof 28 Oct 2002, 3:38 AM
Buggering is a specifically arse-related activity. Settle's suggestion scares me because I'm wondering which orifice is his entry point and which is the exit.
Nicholas Jones on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom 28 Oct 2002, 3:36 AM
I think it works much better as a single poem. People out there should also realise politics is a valid poetic subject.
Christof on #10 by daniella 28 Oct 2002, 3:31 AM
Memories like silverfish - very good. In fact I like all of the sea imagery here, it invokes a feeling of inevitable flux.
Christof on #9 by daniella 28 Oct 2002, 3:29 AM
Great opening three stanzas - this poem gives up its meaning after a few reads. It's not immediate, but it draws you in.