some deleted user
on The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog
14 Oct 2002, 8:22 AM
Go ahead, Tarqin, tell it how it is. This is brilliant. This sea you speak of holds an uncanny resemblance to my mind...
Viva la France
'barren in bounty'--'barren, late of bounty'? the birdsong is a beautiful touch, as are the lips and hips and the promise of both. your aim is indeed true.
Well, he''s dressed in sorrow, compares himself to death, and grieves for his soul.
I like this poem's subtlety. It works for me.
Overwhelmed by snowmen? Have been raised in So.Cal. I suppose I'm not one to judge really. That's one scary snowman.
Sorry no. He's a intimate friend, family really. He's my brother.
Thats not very nice!
We all know that you and the rascal horus8 are one and the same by now. Also, what about Poete Q. McGeneral?
There's Crap, Then there's this.
my carp could conquer your sole any day. with his fins tied behind his back, even.
Marvelous
Stunning
let's see, I read this last night while at Horus8's house. I wasn't too impressed. Horus8 seemed to really get it and he loved "roll them in verbage". This poem is goofy to a certain extent. I realize when you say the dead you don't mean the dead, dead, but I can't help picturing corpse in various states of decomposition and me trying to resurrect them. Also the image of an army just feels anti-poet. Poets do not lead armies, as far as I know, can anyone tell me if a poet has ever lead an army? Does Lincoln count
Bloody hell! Words fail me.
It's good but it's not the one.
only a mere smackerel for me, roo