Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote	Goad 213.61.217.3	22-Apr-05/4:14 AM
"... so insecure you must proselytize yourself into the belief..." lol. yes, it's sad isn't it? the time I spend proselytizing myself. But very astute of you to notice. This is precisely why I have multiple users on 'ranker: each represents a disjoint set of beliefs, and they waste huge amounts of time trying to convert each other to their view points. It's like Sybil, but without the satanic cults. Probably because at some deep level I just find the whole idea of satanic cults fundamentally silly. As far as stats: I don't care a whit about your stats. If you knew me, or even if you bothered to become vaguely familiar with my posting history before jumping into an exchange and making an idiot of yourself, you would realize my comment was entirely self-deprecatory. Ok, well, predominantly. Mostly. If not mostly, at least somewhat. As to my being sanctimonious...well...as much I love the sound of the word, unfortunately I think I swear & curse a bit too much to qualify for it as an appellative :( You can call me "fucking sanctimonious bastard" if you like though -- that would, if delivered in a properly sarcastic tone, be more accurate.
Re: thoughts by not_a_philosopher	Christof 62.121.23.56	22-Apr-05/2:22 AM
Then why don't you write them down?
Re: Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT	Christof 62.121.23.56	22-Apr-05/2:19 AM
Really good stuff. I like the 'why chromosomes' pun. This short and sharp. Top marks, my friend.
Re: a comment on A new leaf by Damien	Damien 212.248.252.234	22-Apr-05/2:00 AM
Its a metephor for somwthing being over something else. "his thoughts towered my thoughts" "that building towers the landscape?" Is that satisfactory.
Re: Gaping Hole by sonawrote	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.70	22-Apr-05/1:47 AM
A touch repetive, but I easily connected with this.
Re: a comment on A new leaf by Damien	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.70	22-Apr-05/1:41 AM
Aw! But good sir, let us not forget the minstrel whom has fought for his crown, Horus8.
Re: a comment on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere	fevriere 62.254.128.4	22-Apr-05/1:33 AM
Thanks. I am surprised though because I'm not sure how much that line means.
Re: a comment on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere	fevriere 62.254.128.4	22-Apr-05/1:32 AM
Ta.
Re: a comment on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere	fevriere 62.254.128.4	22-Apr-05/1:32 AM
That too.
Re: Forbidden by Caducus	A. Nomaly 61.91.36.254	21-Apr-05/10:18 PM
I guess I've gone cynical but these (this one and the seashore one) make me wanna throw up. Keep up the good work. KC
Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote	sonawrote 205.188.116.204	21-Apr-05/9:05 PM
funny how you are so insecure you must proselytize yourself into the belief that I need to alter my appearance..... though my comment referance was to your internal ugliness. To see beyond the surface is one of my abilities, yet one of your inabilities.As far as my intellect, my stats are just fine though I feel no need to brag with numbers.... yet another thing I leave to the unfortunately less esteemed... I write to connect with others and share views... and I feel no reason to bash anyone in the manner which you do. .....For a loser that is so envious of me it cracks me up that you took the time to look up my website....and view only my pictures! The sanctimonious live hollow lives!
Re: A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere	edpeterson 68.79.19.7	21-Apr-05/7:29 PM
i thought love was just sausages.
Re: standing outside the door by nentwined	edpeterson 68.79.19.7	21-Apr-05/7:11 PM
kinda funny. last line doesn't work on me.
Re: Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT	edpeterson 68.79.19.7	21-Apr-05/7:07 PM
I must assume that the misspellings are intentional? and the misplaced apostrophes? the final stanza (paragraph) is unwieldy, and the metaphor a bit cute, but I think it works okay, and the interior images (if that makes any fucking sense) are really good.
Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	21-Apr-05/3:30 PM
look up: Fighting erosion- it fits the conversation.
Re: A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	21-Apr-05/3:23 PM
I like the spuds at the end. just potatoes/ just desserts. cool.
Re: a comment on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	21-Apr-05/3:19 PM
There! Are you two goons happy? The closer was a bit long, wunnit.
Re: The temple of Dissaray by DeadtotheWorld	Dovina 204.250.12.246	21-Apr-05/2:02 PM
At first I thought all the spelling and grammar irregularities were on purpose. Now I think you know no better.
Re: Stop by [mojo]	Dovina 204.250.12.246	21-Apr-05/2:00 PM
It can't be helped. We are sick or we wouldn't do this.
Re: a comment on Sudden Change by Dovina	Dovina 204.250.12.246	21-Apr-05/1:57 PM
There is no "wrong."