Re: Gaping Hole by sonawrote	Damien 212.248.252.234	21-Apr-05/6:54 AM
Feels like something I would of wrote. I trulty feel the meaning, if only these other "critiques" could see that.
Re: a comment on A new leaf by Damien	Damien 212.248.252.234	21-Apr-05/6:51 AM
Cheers Goad. Too young, I dont understand "extended double entrendre". Thanks for the time.
Re: A new leaf by Damien	Goad 213.61.217.3	21-Apr-05/6:42 AM
This poem is brilliant. Of course, you need to have read http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=123683, and seen the little interplay of comments twixt sonawrote & damien to fully appreciate it as an extended double entendre.
Re: a comment on Middle-Aged White Woman by Dovina	Dovina 204.250.12.246	21-Apr-05/6:32 AM
The thing did not load right and I'm not about to change a bunch of settings to make it work.
Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote	Goad 213.61.217.3	21-Apr-05/4:26 AM
well, although my physical appearance is a little below average, moron is unfortunately completely incorrect. I did win that genetic lottery, somewhat, though I have frivolously pissed away that blessing over the years. In fact, I took an iq test last year in which I totally bombed and scored only 139. It's a good thing I never got around to joining Mensa or I would now have to suffer the embarassment of having my ass kicked out.
Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote	Goad 213.61.217.3	21-Apr-05/4:22 AM
Woah...imagine my colossal surprise to discover the butt of the joke doesn't find the joke funny. And you are correct, actually. In terms of physical appearance, I was definitely not a winner of any genetic lottery. How interesting to discover your primary way of judging people is how pretty their face is. I'd never have guessed that either, from the web page where you scale the picture of yourself to make you look skinny (though oddly rubbery, to be honest, sort of like the stretchy girl in the incredibles when she is stretching. Is that look in style now?)
Re: Middle-Aged White Woman by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	21-Apr-05/3:44 AM
Dovina and zodiac: -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. has discovered a wonderful online test, developed by Negro Experts at Harvard, which calculates how racist you are. I suggest you both take it, and present the results to the rest of the group. "[My] data suggest a slight automatic preference for White People relative to Black People" https://implicit.harvard.edu/implicit/uk/selectatest.html Click on "take the race IAT". Work quickly, and for the love of Christ be honest when you present the results.
Re: Flesh of Stone by Tangerines	[mojo] 80.58.44.109	21-Apr-05/3:18 AM
Excellent. The numbered verses might have seemed pretentious on a lesser work, but you pull it off. Quite excellent. 10.
Re: a comment on Stop by [mojo]	[mojo] 80.58.44.109	21-Apr-05/3:10 AM
huh?
Re: Stop by [mojo]	darylchew 202.156.2.130	21-Apr-05/2:44 AM
not a poem, i see.
Re: Reflections on the current U.K. general election campaign by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Ranger 131.251.0.55	21-Apr-05/1:50 AM
predictably enough this has been voted on...
Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote	Ranger 131.251.0.55	21-Apr-05/1:49 AM
Actually the name Goad seems quite appropriate given the outraged replies to his comments
Re: a comment on A new leaf by Damien	Ranger 131.251.0.55	21-Apr-05/1:46 AM
Tis but a place for gentlemen, where cads and bounders abound not. I believe this place would be owned by Dark Angel.
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	Ranger 131.251.0.55	21-Apr-05/1:38 AM
Ha! Yes please guvn'or!
Re: a comment on A new leaf by Damien	Damien 212.248.252.234	21-Apr-05/1:37 AM
Thanks Ellasona, love ya attitude. Are NY clubs dangerous?
Re: a comment on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_	Ranger 131.251.0.55	21-Apr-05/1:33 AM
Mostly the "-ation" so often (which I think someone's already commented on). I also appreciated the fact that you had the presence of mind to let people know this is a 'pimple', yet so many others slate it as though you'd been trying to write Byron. That made me chuckle.
Re: a comment on Utensils of creation by Damien	Damien 212.248.252.234	21-Apr-05/1:20 AM
I'me glad my existence is funny to you.
Re: a comment on Staying Alive by darylchew	darylchew 202.156.2.130	21-Apr-05/12:59 AM
it's about aids.
Re: Head and Shoulders by Jeremi B. Handrinos	[mojo] 80.58.44.109	21-Apr-05/12:08 AM
Intriguing. Menthol shampoo or one of those wire devices?
Re: Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos	[mojo] 80.58.44.109	21-Apr-05/12:03 AM
Different. It bears the repetition well, but starts to founder. I'd cut verse 3. "House with no start" seems nonsencicle, or stretched at best.