on Ignoranus by Yardbird
29 Oct 2002, 7:12 AM
Almost certainly true.
on betsy's hands by onepinksock
30 Oct 2002, 1:35 AM
Evocative, especially the stuff about clay and glass.
on Are you spreading it? by Voth269
30 Oct 2002, 1:24 AM
Nope.
on other by ThreeFourSix
28 Oct 2002, 7:49 AM
Honest. Thanks.
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
30 Oct 2002, 1:26 AM
This is so much better than any of your other poems - it's sweet adn funny. maybe 'Dad shoots'? Then you get a rhyme with 'scoots' and cartoon violence at the same time.
on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones
30 Oct 2002, 7:35 AM
As Keats said, as poems do not come as easily as leaves to the tress, you might as well not bother. This is very good.
on advice for the heated by <~>
29 Oct 2002, 1:45 AM
This is very practical. Where do you spray it though?
on For Flight by <~>
29 Oct 2002, 1:47 AM
This is extremely fruity, z, and you know it. 'That release' ? OOh, such filth.
on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>
29 Oct 2002, 1:49 AM
The last stanza - very wise!
on some deleted poem
29 Oct 2002, 1:51 AM
It's the collected works of Blade. In a bag. With a split pig. Marvellous.
on Mystery on the Bridge by vulcan
28 Oct 2002, 7:59 AM
Why did you resubmit this? I can't see any changes... But anyway, I'll vote again.
on Worth the wait by INTRANSIT
29 Oct 2002, 7:17 AM
A very tender little skech. Simple and honest. By the way, I was interested in what you said about me sounding as if I'd worked on the road - I never have. What is it about my work that makes you think I have?
on some deleted poem
28 Oct 2002, 7:58 AM
'When I rest in my divine.'Divan?
on The First Poem by jrtails
28 Oct 2002, 8:06 AM
This is plagirised from John Cooper Calrke. Word for word, with capitals, with hyphens. See cyberspike.com, his own website. You've been rumbled my son.
on The First Poem by jrtails
28 Oct 2002, 8:06 AM
This is plagirised from John Cooper Clarke. Word for word, with capitals, with hyphens. See cyberspike.com, his own website. You've been rumbled my son. This poem should be taken off now.
on wax by New Life Drug
28 Oct 2002, 7:45 AM
This is indeed strange. You central idea is good and some of your images work fine, and some bits seem unformed. This wax needs a bit more shaping I think. But your concept is good.
on Darkness by The_Shadows_Smile
28 Oct 2002, 7:48 AM
If tey're walking the narrow path of light and dark, how come they're wrapped in their own darkness forever? How does that work?
on survival of the weakest by brazen
28 Oct 2002, 7:37 AM
Why not?