replying on My existance by Twisted Wizard
4 Jan 2003, 3:11 PM
lol, you must understand. Walking around New Orleans all day, coming home, crashing, and waking up at 3 a.m. to write his. No revision, no nothing. So pretty much you see it as how i wrote it. I will be sure to revise it and repost.
on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
4 Jan 2003, 3:02 PM
Dude don't listen to assholes on here that don't know a damn thing about good poetry. I feel that if you feel good about what you wrote, it is good work. I honestly don't know why people put zero's for this. Hell, i could write up something on the life of a fucking mayfly and it would get better than that. Keep up the good work, check out some of my older and newer works.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
3 Jan 2003, 11:04 PM
lol, dude this poem is awesome. Funny as hell i have to say. Although having to deal with your cursed arse, i still think it is pretty cool.
on Enslaved by Twisted Wizard
15 Aug 2002, 10:31 PM
thanx alot, i know most of my "writing" isnt that great. (i dont know if i can even call it work). I am going to try harder to work on writing skills and stuff like that and maybe try never before done writing techniques.
on For my darling Lori by Twisted Wizard
10 Aug 2002, 2:31 PM
go to hell and fuckin die. Your writing is the epitome of shit if you havent noticed. You wanna know why i dont write about jesus? I would much rather read about him and tell others about him than just simply write about him.
on Untitled by Twisted Wizard
8 Aug 2002, 1:52 AM
that is really fuckin sick you know that? What the fuck are you some sort of fuckin racist, divine hater? Just go fuck off and die alright
on The King's Assassin by Twisted Wizard
8 Aug 2002, 1:42 AM
so what you're saying is that its good or no?
on Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard
16 Jul 2002, 3:19 PM
heh, i'll do that :)
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 Jul 2002, 11:43 PM
i do believe he meant -0....thats fucking impossible. Why would someone be so stupid as to make that a rating, you know maybe a -1 or -2 but -0? There is no such thing as a negative number who's value is 0! Therefore i deem that comment suckworthy. Oh and I really hope that you werent referring to lars ulrich.
on Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 Jul 2002, 11:34 PM
contact the f.b.i for what? that is utterly childish i swear
on Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard
13 Jul 2002, 11:16 PM
thanx, it is much appreciated that someone thinks good of my works.
on Searching... by kissmeufool58
11 Jul 2002, 12:09 AM
hey, thanx I didn't realize that there was more than one person on here that appreciated my writing. This poem is good in my view. I would say that if it could be made longer and with a little bit of editing it could be really good. Always remember that there is always room for improvement :)
on Unfortunate Semen Incident by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
10 Jul 2002, 8:46 PM
i'll give it to you on this one, it was funny
on Let's Do a Test by GAC
8 Jul 2002, 2:27 PM
quite amusing, but good
on Unknown Plains by Twisted Wizard
7 Jul 2002, 9:50 PM
why thank you
on Forbidden Love by DolphnLvr82
9 Jun 2002, 2:33 PM
jesus christ dude, again must you be so criticizing of other people's feelings. You are nothing but a breath of fresh air on this site so i suggest you either stop criticizing or find some place else to get your jollies.....good poem
on To You by Cha no Onna
4 May 2002, 7:29 PM
Awesome poem