replying on The Red Basket by pain killer
2 Jun 2004, 1:59 PM
okay...sorry about the "angry chickens" but there are really no other kind..honestly...at least i didn't go for plucking and clucking!
replying on FINGER PIE by titan69
2 Jun 2004, 1:55 PM
Hairy pie. this is fantastic. a woman under the covers never ages. i bet there's loads of "poets" on this site wish they'd wrote that line. Stunning.
replying on wolf rose PART 2 by titan69
2 Jun 2004, 1:52 PM
you don't live near that pub do you? The Slaughtered Lamb or whatever it's called...the one on the yorkshire moors as immortalised in American Werewolf in London? Just thought i'd ask
"Who be that stranger yon barrr?"
"Who be that stranger yon barrr?"
replying on GENTLE JANE by titan69
2 Jun 2004, 1:45 PM
Titan...i'm reading your stuff and there seems to be a recurring theme here...you seem to be a happy fun loving guy who obviously enjoys winding up the more pretentious elements on poemranker and you make me feel embarressed about my own miserabilist self pitying tendencies (I'm not a trainspotter however...THAT one really is made up okay) (is it really a coincidence that poemranker rhymes with w.....???
) but Titan...are you getting enough?
) but Titan...are you getting enough?
on Sisters of mercy by titan69
2 Jun 2004, 1:38 PM
i love the narcotic...robotic (ally) bit. full marks for even thinking you could get away with it. and also the line about "emotions welling" most people would have gone on to rhyme it with "penis swelling" or summat but no...you lead us astray ther reign us back in with "she put her hands across my mouth to try and stop me yelling" genius!keep up the squiggling and squirming!!!
replying on STEP 4 by the codeine kid
2 Jun 2004, 1:15 PM
ha thanks titan...although this is not autobiographical..it's made up y'know...as a matter of fact my life is very much...ah okay you got me i have a shit life...how'dya guess?..i've just been through the wringer recently..i'll get over it though...just gotta write a few more poems i guess...art as personal therapy and all that..now let me check out some a your stuff..i'm still very much a newcomer to this site...still finding my way around
on Jimmy and Chichi Choo (Sub-Dylan Bullshit Blues) by the codeine kid
2 Jun 2004, 9:17 AM
this is more a song than a poem...to be read aloud in the style of dylan's homesick blues...there's no big or clever words or word play but it kinda...SKANKS
on Preacher Man by masticatedmess
31 May 2004, 12:11 PM
this is good man. s'like something nick cave would pass off as writing in "and the ass saw the angel"...nick cave meets flannery o connor under the shadow of the peyote. good stuff
on johnny dowd by the codeine kid
27 May 2004, 11:07 AM
this is my first poem and i think it is a very good one. i know that is not very modest, but the neither is johnny dowd...or tom waits for that matter. now i know i'm no tom waits...but i aam the codeine kid!
oh and tyhe way you dismiss "Pop culture" with sneering contempt gives you away as the prissy,psuedo intellectual snob you so obviously are...and you're not even clever (or big!)
You tit...