on As the Flowers Bloom by nothingtoanyone
7 Jun 2005, 5:30 PM
Are you a drone in love with a female worker. They have no interest in the likes of you as they bring home the nectar while you loaf about the hive.
on Haiku String of the Bee by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
7 Jun 2005, 2:31 PM
I think haiku is not the best form for this. And "love for queen" seems unlikely.
on Up Close at a Distance by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
7 Jun 2005, 2:27 PM
I like the mixture of emotions and the overiding passion. The ~ 's in ther first verse are a nice touch. Wish you'd used them in the second.
on he's leaving by eliznhaz
7 Jun 2005, 12:07 PM
Tender, but too close to the way I really think it will be. Give me imagery to cover my sorrow.
replying on Snow by lil_evil_boi
7 Jun 2005, 11:50 AM
If he had simply admitted to posting a quote he remembers from youth and thought it was his own or some explanation like that, all could be forgiven. But when he deletes the poem, calling it a misunderstanding, I have to wonder if all his poems are copied from somewhere.
replying on Snow by lil_evil_boi
7 Jun 2005, 10:37 AM
What misunderstanding?
replying on Smoky Mountain High by Dovina
7 Jun 2005, 9:33 AM
No, only that more than one ball is inappropriate.
replying on Smoky Mountain High by Dovina
7 Jun 2005, 9:31 AM
rain's mocking result
replying on Applicative-Order Fixed-Point Operator by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
7 Jun 2005, 9:16 AM
Actually, I feel a need to be inferior, not superior as you say. Maybe you know that and figure its how a PSYCH or former slave thinks. My comments are usually attempts at clarification or simplification. I seldom mean them as trumps. Some are admittedly attempts at humor, like the one you are responding to.
replying on Applicative-Order Fixed-Point Operator by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
6 Jun 2005, 8:28 PM
If I post a little programming segment and call it "Beak Flapping Flagellation," will you say I'm funny too.
replying on Always Forever by Princess_Snowflake
6 Jun 2005, 5:49 PM
Your comment appears as a reply to mine. That's the same as talking to me. If you want to address the poet, your comment should be placed in the comment box right under the poem.
replying on Always Forever by Princess_Snowflake
6 Jun 2005, 5:39 PM
o I see, "There's not one moment where I give a shit about you and your dear friend," was said calmly and smilingly.
Forgiven, anyway.
Forgiven, anyway.
replying on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy
6 Jun 2005, 5:37 PM
"Be cute." is better and shorter.
replying on Always Forever by Princess_Snowflake
6 Jun 2005, 5:33 PM
I believe you are shouting at Princess Snowflake while looking at me. At least I hope so.
replying on Smoky Mountain High by Dovina
6 Jun 2005, 2:45 PM
The sun is rising, and although it will eventually descend and in so doing will appear to swell, the sun appears to shrink as it rises. Alliteration be dammed unless it fits the reality.
replying on Smoky Mountain High by Dovina
6 Jun 2005, 2:45 PM
Although DoubleU called the sun “he,” for whatever reason, you should know from her shape that balls are inappropriate.
replying on Smoky Mountain High by Dovina
6 Jun 2005, 2:44 PM
Summer has many answers to the extreme rains the mountains of Southern California have received this past winter. The answer I’m focusing on is the strong probability of wildfire. These mountains burn every 50 years on average, and this year, if a fire starts as the Santa Ana winds come hot and dry off the desert, the rain-swollen bushes will burn like a hell we have never seen.
The last line is for comparison with the first verse, but it may be rubbing an obvious comparison into the readers face. I am so often accused of not including enough information, and being unclear, that I put it in just to be sure.
The last line is for comparison with the first verse, but it may be rubbing an obvious comparison into the readers face. I am so often accused of not including enough information, and being unclear, that I put it in just to be sure.