on On Reading by the_poetess
14 Mar 2005, 6:56 AM
Some good thoughts, but overwritten. How can you predict what you will never do?
on a wonderful life by crooked_smile
14 Mar 2005, 6:53 AM
Verse 2 poses an interesting question.
on history by whispern_smoke_wisp
14 Mar 2005, 6:50 AM
The past. History is just a sample, not fate.
on Delusions Of A Peaceful Place by Stacy Stewart
14 Mar 2005, 6:47 AM
I can imagine it. Good title.
replying on The Because Collection by INTRANSIT
14 Mar 2005, 6:40 AM
Admittedly, some are clever reversals, but why so many, and for what?
replying on How to make a suicide bomber by Caducus
14 Mar 2005, 6:31 AM
Agreed. I don't know why you thought I thought otherwise, except of course that I'm just naturally a dullard and embrace anything bad or "AMERICA = NAUGHTY" or whatever. Go ahead, use me for your soapbox.
on The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite
13 Mar 2005, 10:00 PM
And glasses keep the bugs outa your eyes while cycling. I've been told that in the past, which is the same as "I've been told that."
on The Because Collection by INTRANSIT
13 Mar 2005, 9:55 PM
Because you've gone bonkers or drunk.
replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
13 Mar 2005, 9:51 PM
No, it's directed at me. You don't even have to consider the colors or the indentation to know that.
replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
13 Mar 2005, 9:49 PM
Next question:
Is "stupid" a noun, as in a name for your silliness, or an adjective, the way to describe it?
Is "stupid" a noun, as in a name for your silliness, or an adjective, the way to describe it?
replying on Enchanted Place by Beyond_Dreams
13 Mar 2005, 6:41 AM
zodiac is the dim, you dim. You've misplaced your comment again, distracted no doubt by the pretty pink sheathes.
replying on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina
13 Mar 2005, 6:24 AM
What a lumbering flourish of hackneyed circumlocution. Never have I seen so little said in so many unsupported words.
on The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle
12 Mar 2005, 5:46 PM
I rarely say this because it's a bum rule, but Show, don't Tell.
on Deep Thought by Dreammaker1024
12 Mar 2005, 5:44 PM
Not really a poem.
on wishes by the_poetess
12 Mar 2005, 11:32 AM
I don't think anybody gets you. I've read the comments and see you as much younger, but like me, healthy, smart and bored. Jumping off a bridge and can't even drown. So what can I tell you except to find somepalce to feel needed and keep plugging away at this; it has potential.
replying on Enchanted Place by Beyond_Dreams
12 Mar 2005, 11:16 AM
You fooled me then.
on Girl of my Dreams??? by thepinkbunnyofdoom
12 Mar 2005, 11:15 AM
An interesting romance to follow as it winds through the ranker.
on Never Did You by Dreammaker1024
12 Mar 2005, 11:12 AM
Not really a poem, maybe a prose poem. To be a poem, it should be cleverly written, unususl, and touching to an uninformed reader.