on First by Dovina
9 Aug 2005, 8:10 AM
So we're all Jerry's kids?
on Stream of Consciousness (#2) by MacFrantic
10 Aug 2005, 8:48 AM
fallen within the drenched raincoat she finds a penguin cavity filled with desire to run and roam and make pool noodles out of foam
on Stream of Consciousness (#1) by Enkidu
10 Aug 2005, 8:50 AM
Immediately remove your keyboard, shellac it, and donate it to the local museum. Next, buy a new one and finish this novel. Run straight home, Charlie: This. Is. Your. Golden. Ticket.
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2005, 8:52 AM
What class was this written in? Before lunch or after lunch? Details please.
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2005, 8:57 AM
A comical glimpse into the life of a sad, sad individual
on Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic
1 Sep 2005, 9:25 AM
[Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic]
"This poem makes me want to impregnate your daughter, then impregnate the resulting child, and continue that trend for twelve hundred iterations resulting in a child so twisted and recursive in form as to be worthy of being smeared across your face. *4*"
"This poem makes me want to impregnate your daughter, then impregnate the resulting child, and continue that trend for twelve hundred iterations resulting in a child so twisted and recursive in form as to be worthy of being smeared across your face. *4*"
on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy
31 Aug 2005, 9:59 AM
Good and memorable poem
on Stranger by MacFrantic
2 Sep 2005, 7:35 AM
Third stanza is a bit shaky. Otherwise good. *8*
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2005, 8:56 AM
Interesting concept
on The Absense of God by Bluemonkey
2 Sep 2005, 7:40 AM
Not deep enough to be a repudiation of omnipresence; just deep enough to be flooded, gutted, and razed.
on Katrina by jessicazee
2 Sep 2005, 10:29 AM
Could be really good, but the line "The quarter is French" is quite odd. Almost as odd as the French. Perhaps that's what you meant by it...
on Parrallelogram Perry Como by Crakyamuni
6 Sep 2005, 10:05 AM
"?in the sea / in the sea" looks like a console query
on Dear George Bush by scitz
2 Nov 2005, 4:44 PM
Everyboudy knouws that douring the American War Against the Hounourable King, us English were fighting for the rights of woumen, the blind, schooul children, and the ineluctable right to play Checkeurs the day befoure and afteur the Christiaun Sabbauth. You American fools deserve to be destrouyed!
on The Queen Mums Teeth by scitz
2 Nov 2005, 4:38 PM
(sorry if this sucks it was written while Return of the jedi was on
pause, the ewoks are kicking ass, gotta go)
pause, the ewoks are kicking ass, gotta go)
on Tough Love by Crann Mascher
21 Nov 2005, 8:33 PM
10 for meretriciousness
on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0
17 Oct 2007, 12:45 AM
The word "separate" is the strongest word in this poem, thank you. Cheers and beers, and welcome to Area 6, secret hideout.
on While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT
17 Oct 2007, 12:47 AM
A slice of time. A 17 calorie slice of time, a thin, carbohydrate-free slice of time. A trans-fat free, utterly nutritionally void slice of time. ~10~
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2007, 12:48 AM
smells like a cigarette, reads like a dream ~9~